Its a bit sloppy but I just wanted to show smells my progress on this one.

here it is:

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I think it's great ^^

Keep it up =)

It sounds great but it would be better if your guitar sound was a bit higher

That's very nice take, but as supersize says, it would be better if the guitar is louder

I cannot comment the palm muting since the sound was low, but can only advise you to try my original fingering, I designed it on purpose, and then record it again and will see the difference

Thanks for the comment s Dejan , I will uplaos a new version using right fingering and with better sound.

Looking forward to it

And if you need any help with the lesson, feel free to ask

I can't hear you guitars sound very clearly mate, but I think you played really well and precise. Your right hand is a bit stiffed, but this is not a major concern, it will get relaxed the more you play this tune. Well done mate.