Here are 2 new takes, master!
Knopfler is much better Tolek,
there are still some timing issues but lets
have a rest for this one for a while,
you did very good job so far!
Luke was also better this time
but I still miss more vibrato in this sweet melody you've made.
I think we could work much more on vibrato at this point,
what do you think of playing the same thing with using
and focusing on vibrato 100%?
You can apply it on everything, regular notes and bended ones as well.
However it would be good to get a video of it,
that way I could see your posture when playing vibrato
and give some suggestions if needed.
Also, we can try working more intensely on bending,
here's one lesson that I've recommended for
almost every student in my MTP,
http://www.guitarmasterclass.net/solo-guit...bending-lesson/ .
Again it would be great to have a video
but Mp3 is fine too until you get home.
Two more takes. This time pentatonic lesson at 75 bpm and 90 bpm.
Yeah, take at 90bpm was overally better IMO,
there were some sloppy parts over those faster runs,
Em Pentatonic,G Pentatonic and the last skipping part.
But timing was very good and tight compared with
75 bpm take, maybe you still have troubles
to fully understand what I'm saying but believe me,
slower is sometimes harder.
I truly hope that you'll get some recording session job
to do in near future and then you'll realize,
producer will ask for 100% timing and if tune
is in slower tempo you'll have more problems,
that's very common thing,trust me!
Lets try with 2 more takes, both speeds,
think more of timing for 75 bpm (tapping with your foot will help)
and eliminate that noise in faster runs at 90 bpm.
And one thing about your tone, you can try with less gain and reverb
this time for better articulation.