This is my first attempt of the lesson lesson Melodic Black Metal: Naglfar by Lian Gerbino.

Here is a link lesson: http://www.guitarmasterclass.net/ls/Melodi..._Metal_Naglfar/

In this video I used:

-Ibanez RG4EXFM1 with Seymour Duncan TB-6 and Dimarzio Humbucker from Hell

-Line 6 Tone Port UX2, Reaper, Sony Vegas, Pure Digital Flip camera

Very good take. Your playing is good here, but timing isn't, cause you are constantly rushing ahead of the beat. Try fixing that, and possibly cut down the amount of overdrive to achieve more definition.

I believe that the timing issues are connected to tension, you look very tense on the video. Try relaxing as much as you can

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You're rushing a bit, otherwise it's fine! I believe you can record perfect take very quickly!

6.6 on this one man.