Hi guys!

After my first failed attempt at this lesson I gave it another shot and (hopefully) implemented the hints I got from Lian, Zsolt and Daniel. I used more gain on this one, tried to make the vibrato more aggressive and worked on the fast picking parts.
Record with an Ibanez guitar, a V-amp 3 and a webcam.
Original lesson: http://www.guitarmasterclass.net/ls/Melodi...wer_Metal_Solo/

awesome man!!!

Good job overall. Some notes sound a little sharp to me. Keep attention on vibrato and bending.

Awesome take!

HI man, nice to see another take from you!

In this vid your timing is much better than the previous one (red-and-white-stripes). What I'd work on is to even and viden the vibratos a bit more, and work more on the licks, because your notes tend to ring together. I'd suggest you to avoid this at all cost.

Cheers buddy!

Much better on this one bro, 8.5!