Hey guys,

Here is the second acoustic song i have written. Haven't mixed it yet. If you want to write a solo for the chorus parts (1:57-2:20 and 2:54-3:18), let me know I'd be appriciated Hope you like it and waiting your comments



Cheers,
Dogukan.

Nice! Love your melodies, Dogukan Is it C# minor? I will try record something, but no promises though

Quite cool, I like the beginning. Are you still working on it, or is this the finished written unmixed product?
The main theme has a good melody

Thanks man Yeah key is C# minor




Thanks a lot I kinda finished it, just need a solo for the chorus parts and it's done

Cool In that case I would take another look at the solo at 0:40 / 1:37. The bends are kinda off, and your classic rock pentatonic thingy doesn't really work in the context of the song, for my ears at least. Also there are parts that are off rythmicly throughout the song, but that's not that big of a deal (sort of fits your whole song-feeling). But unless you really like that solo, I'd give it another shot, because the main melody is quite nice, and to be brutally honest, I don't think the solo is.
Also, it would sound less repetative if you actually recorded the things that repeats severeal times, instead of just copying the audio (mainly the repeated solo that I talked about just now).

You are right man I have been thinking about that solo aswell. I just improvised at that part and honestly i didn't like that much too And about copying, it's just for me too see the whole structure. I will re-record all the parts and write a new solo at that part Thanks for your comment man

Nicely composed, but one complaint - for rhythm part use an acoustic steel guitar instead of electric , will sound much better

Good idea Dokugan do you have an accoustic guitar available? If so, you'd need to mic it if you don't have a pickup in it. It would make production a bit more complicated but would sound very spiff. I'm liking the overall vibe quite bit! Can't wait to see how it all turns out!

Todd

Thanks Todd and Sinisa And yeah i have an electro-acoustic guitar. I will make the recording with that Thanks for the advices

Dogukan,

It reminds me of an old 6o's surf song if you keep the electric strumming, that is - I could try and come up with some drums for ya, but only at some point next week after I return from the Mozart Rocks! gig on Staurday.

Try and record with an acoustic guitar though, it'll change the scenery completely

cheerios!

PS: don't try to incorporate pentatonic stuff just because you know it, come up with a solo by using the same technique you used for the melodies - just playing what you heard in your head. Only this time, develop it a little

Thank you for your comments Cosmin, drums would be awesome And i will definitely record this with my acoustic guitar after i come up with some new ideas for solo parts Glad you liked it

Dogukan,