Ok guys ,here it is 1. JamesT 00:02 - 00:51
2. WillJam 00:51 - 01:33
3. Maris 01:33 - 02:17
4. Tyler 02:18 - 03:00
5. K1R 03:00 - 03:44
6. Jaxn4 03:44 - 04:27
7. Piotr 04:27 - 05:11Click to view attachment
First, let's say one thing: I cut off a bit some of the parts, because I forgot to say that would be a good that intro remain empty, but it doesn't matter,somehow tried to mix a guitars and it turned out very well, I hope you do not have nothing against.
Next thing I wanted to mention is - feeling the vibe !
It's about sound settings. Distorted sound is not exactly the best for this type of backing, it's too aggressive and breaks the beauty of the atmosphere. But if we ignore that little detail, I am very pleased how you have did a job, according to your abilities of course !
Let's go to a bit more detailed analysis :1. JamesT
As I said above, except for distortion, which bothers me a little, the whole solo is great. phrases are assembled nicely, deliberately, and very clean, if we ignore a few unwanted dist tones .Highlight : 00:30 - 00:43 !2. WillJam
Very well balanced, without much philosophizing,nice and calm, also your sense of tact is very good, with minor mistakes!
But I spotted moment of deconcentration at 01:19 - 01:20 !
It's like those few notes are played like " wait ,a need a break", until you come up with the following phrase, or ?Highlight: 01:10 - 01:183. Maris
Another good take! I will begin to repeat, and I would like to avoid that. You come up with a nice "question and answer" topic,very smart, but, why you didn't complete the job ?? Isn't it much nicer at 01:56 that you shift one or two octave higher ? instead- you came back to the beginning ! think about it Highlight: 01:49 - 01:56
...and ascending ascending ascending 4. Tyler
Well..the most interesting and weirdo recording so far! I did not expect that /C blues&mysteriousnotes/ scale can fit so well in the whole situation! Different from the whole story, but somehow fits, silly! You managed to migrate the whole song in a different genre!
If this was your intent - then it is very courageous and productive! Small objections to the timing, but nothing too serious!Highlight: 02:27 - 02:37
Very nice and calm! And a good relaxing sound ! You have made a good story, and all elements are well fit! Introduction, topic, elaboration, epilogue... well done !!Highlight: 03:24 - 03:406. Jaxn4
In the first part of song your phrases are short and concise. This, of course, is not bad, but sounds somehow too mechanical . I have the impression that you are afraid to fall out if you put a bit sparkle to it !
The second part (04:04) is much better, longer and more meaningful phrases, smoother, more comfortable for the ears.
Good job !Highlight: 04:05 - 04:187. Piotr
You probably expect all praises for this amazing guitarist! Weeel .. you are right!
We all know how good Piotr is, so I will not waste words on technique, phrases, tone, everything is superb!
But,I listened to this tape again and again and finally I managed to find a mistake! ops.. I can't say mistake, more like suggestion!
At 04:47- 04:49 ! you are finished shortly before a new circle, introduction to 2nd Part would be ideal that you're here a bit late with the whole phrase or at least last a few notes !
But just my opinion Highlight : from start to finish
I am very happy with your footage guys, and would like to repeat this very soon, but with video shots.I hope you will accept any of my criticism in the best way, and I wish you a lot of hard exercise !
Thanks again and see you soon here,