I have been spending the night working on some lyrics for a song for my band.
I just want some feedback on the writing if you guys think that these lyrics can work in a song
Verse
Now is the time to wake up and see
that the world is not what it used to be
we got fight to make things right
to make a stand and defend our land
now grab you axe and turn your volume to max
and you play until your fingers bleed
rock is the music that will make us smile
now let us party till the end of time.
Refrain
Raise your fist in the air
we will be rock all night and day X2