Hey Andy!
you're on your way man! Timing is good but there are some slips here and there and the shapes need to be more defined, as well as your hand synchronization. There are parts which aren't sounding well, because of this issue. I suggest more practice, at a slow temp, where yo uare in control, meaning that the first assignment for this lesson - I would like you to post this into your thread, not in the REC section, would be to record a slower version over a backing track of this lesson where I want you to focus on playing everything as perfect as possible. Also, take care to check your guitar for tuning - it sounds a bit de-tuned.
I know you can get a 10 on this one matey! Let's start building up shall we?
all the best
Cosmin