Original lesson: Beginner's Corner 3: Open Chords by Bear Rose

This is great! I listened to a couple of times because I thought I hear a delay,but never mind . The timing is excellent, and I really have no objections to strumming. Maybe a bit more of gain, like the original take, but a matter of taste. Keep rocking !!

I like your tone! It's mellow and pleasant to listen to (after a wild gig with lots of grooving and distortion this soothes the ears) as Sinisa said, I don't find anything wrong with the take! Congrats!

Congrats mate! You did an excellent job! Keep on rocking!

I like your tone and timing! I would like to feel a little more attitude when you are playing!
Good take! It's 10 for me!

Great job! You get a 10 from me. I actually like that you used a cleaner tone than my original tone. It compliments the tune very well! Nice choice and great job.

Very good playing, and I think you could show a bit more attitude on this one, like Alex mentioned, strum more sharply, so it doesn't sound as a harp. Another important thing: you are doing strum motion in a bit strange fashion. It would be better in the long run if you would do it the same way as Bear did: Observe carefully as he is doing 16th note up & down strumming motion, so he never loses a bit, and makes all his rhythmical patterns sound nice.

9.6!