Hi, this was a good attempt. There's main places where you need work to get it sounding better.
Firstly, when you bend, you're bending a bit too high so the note is sounding sharp. One thing you can do to help you get the right pitch is the play the note that you are going to bend to before you try bending it. For example, if you are bending from a G to an A, first find and A and play it (it could be on the same string or another string, it doesn't matter) and then practise bending to the same pitch you've just heard.
The other thing is timing. Try to work on getting the timing of the phrases the same as what Adrian is doing.
Aside from those areas, you did good. Your vibrato has a lot of potential too !