Hi Carmine! I can notice the improvements on this take! Those bends are more precise, and you look more comfortable playing them. I also see that you started adding some vibrato. That's great, continue working on it, and try to get a wider one. Always remember the mix comment!
Apr 17 2012, 05:56 PM
Hey Carmine, I agree with Gabe. As you may have noticed, your improvement is really visible with the amount of practice you put in these lessons. Focus on what me and the guys are telling you and you'll only improve more and more!
Apr 17 2012, 11:27 PM
That's it Carmine,much better! Of course, with a some more of final polishing it would be really great !
Apr 18 2012, 06:35 AM
Much much better! I like this take a lot! Can hear bending improvement! Keep it up! Too bad about the backing track!
Apr 28 2012, 04:02 PM
great take! The only suggestions I would make would be to continue working on those bends to get them to the exact pitch, and use not so bright of a tone. Maybe flip your selector switch on your guitar all the way up and use your neck pickup. And, like the others said, it would be good to hear a bit more of the backing track.
Overall.....very well done!
May 7 2012, 07:10 PM
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