Today's take is a T-day thing
It's means - timming and tuning. I hear some tunning issues and a timming need more focus. I like Your hand sync. Notes are nice and clean. This timming issue depends on a few things. For example - focusing veeery much on the "virtual beats" even to You notes on guitar. Good idea is to try to imagine them first or clap with hands
From my experience I can say that timming issue with licks like those are usually more a matter of overall experience with metronome. I mean...we can practice with metronome or PRACTICE. The difference is how much You actually focus on the metronome. Recording yourself and replaying it is a best reference
Again there is not much to complain