Good stuff!! Congrats on putting together a spiff track!!! Completing an entire song is quite an achievement. Far too often, we stop short and record just enough backing to solo over and call it a day. Putting an actual song together with a start, middle and end is a challenge in it's own right and doing it well is even harder. In short THIS RAWKS!!!
Your production value has really improved since I first heard your recordings. Your playing has improved quite a bit as well!! Keep progressing and RAWKING!!!
After a second listen, I really dig the "chorus" type sections with the melody line, but just as a thought, maybe adding an octave up, down or both, or maybe a harmony or "call and response" etc. to make the melody throgh line "stick" a bit more would only serve to improve on an already spiff track
Todd
Hi.
I released a new track on Bandcamp. It's a progressive metal instrumental influenced by Andy James, Paul Wardingham, and Trond Vold. I put my own style into it, of course, but the track is reminiscent of these players.
I hope you enjoy.
https://brandonburch.bandcamp.com/track/revitalize