Hello krakou
Very good choice you had playing on this track and chosing this lesson.
You did a great job.The tone is very important here, i think the song needed more crunchie tone because it sounds a little "buzzy" to me.
A good tone can inspire you a lot, more than you can imagine.
When you start that pentatonic lick between 0:03 and 0:04 where you grab the note D is a little bit over tone compared to the original lesson.
In the original lesson that D note is played relaxed, no bending involved, you just bend it a little and it sounds unsure to me.
I have noticed a little" dirt" at 0:08 on the C# note.Try to be carefull on the palm muting technique and keep the note in tone, it's a little bit higher because of an unshure vibrato.
Between 0:09 and 0:10 i heard a natural harmonic B string 7 fret, again palm muting technique problem.
I know that it's blues and a lot of blues players are playing with a litle "dirt", but i had to compare you to the original lesson
Between 0:27 and 0:28 you rushed a little bit with the lick, try to laid-back, feel relax when you play.
0:49-0:50 palm please