Hello mate, welcome to the rec board
You did a great job here, i think that you have a cool vibrato, nice tone, but like Gabriel said you need more volume in the mix
so we can hear you better.
I consider that at 0:12 the bending it's a litle bit under the tone, the lick between 0:13 and 0:14 needs a little laid back
Looking forward to hear more from you