Hi Cael! Great job with this one!
I don't think that this lesson needs more work from you. The only thing that could be more consistent is your vibrato technique, and as this lesson has many long notes it a good excuse to do it, so please focus on it if you decide to continue practicing this one. It's a good idea to play along with the original lesson to imitate Emir's vibrato and maybe incorporate a bit of his dynamics.
Besides that, your playing is good as well as your timing in the whole lesson.
Keep on rocking.