Hi David, wow it's great to see you working on this one again
I watched the previous take for reference first.. this is a definite improvement.
The co-ordination between your hands is so much better now, they're working together.
The only thing which makes it less than perfect is when you're climbing up the high E string at around 0:17. The occasional note is missing because you're already shifting your hand in anticipation of the next shape
But that's the only real 'problem'. Well done. Oh, and you're picking technique looks very efficient and relaxed btw !