Hi mate! Nice take.
Here are some things to have in mind:
- Be careful with timing. You tend to play a bit before the beat on many parts.
- It would be better if you put your guitar louder in the mix on future takes to let us hear your playing clearer.
- Work on your vibrato technique, it needs to be more consistent and more connected with the backing's groove.
I think that it would be good if you join this workout:
http://www.guitarmasterclass.net/guitar_fo...showtopic=54317So, to summarize, this is a good take, but you need to continue practicing to make your playing tighter and adjust details regarding feeling.
Keep on the hard work!