Hi Peter!
Great to see you working on this classic lesson!
My friends have shared very precise feedback about your playing and your tone here. I had the same sensation while listening to your take. It's not bad but I'm not totally convinced of your groove, articulation and tone. I would start by tweaking the tone which I think will make you feel more comfortable while playing the lesson and then get into polishing each section to make it sound smoother and tighter.
Please experiment with your tone and feel free to send me some audio samples for extra feedback.
Keep on the hard work!