Another Jam... |
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Aug 31 2008, 09:27 PM |
Sweet!! Has a cool sound
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Aug 31 2008, 11:24 PM |
I like it, has a funky sound to it... did you do all the tracks or is that a backing youre playing along to?
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Aug 31 2008, 11:27 PM |
good track in there
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Sep 1 2008, 12:09 AM |
Thanks guys...appreciate you taking the time to listen.
I do all guitar parts. Bass and Drums are the Boss DR880 |
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Sep 2 2008, 12:00 PM |
It's very good man, great fusion type tune. I would suggest a couple of things,
Mixing - Kick and snare sound little synthetic, and they should be 1-2dB lower. Guitar playing - sounds very good, but it would be even better, if there were some main theme, and a structured improvising. This way you get a bunch of licks tied together with pauses. Playing is good, and phrasing as well, but need more fine tuning. Backing - One or two more key changes and some kind of a bridge in the middle would definitely make this backing shine. This way it sounds kinda looped. But it is OK, I like it reminds me on a musician from these parts that uses same type of backings and makes pretty interesting stuff. -------------------- - Ivan's Video Chat Lesson Notes HERE
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Sep 5 2008, 10:22 PM |
Very cool improv man!! Regarding the mix , drums definitely have to be lower in the mix...Backing it self is cool, more chord changes are welcome though..Regarding the solo , you played a lot of cool licks and everything...Try playing a little more with phrases though..You are making pauses , that is a good thing.But try varying their length and extending and playing some longer passages too to give some balance...You are a little repeating yourself with placement of those pauses..Think about it like a conversation, you sometimes speak short sentences and sometimes really long ones.Combine
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Sep 8 2008, 01:32 AM |
Thanks Bogdan I'm actually working on the phrasing conversation style thing with my next jam. And the mix as well. Hopefully inching closer to a formula that works. Thanks again for your input fused Yeah you are definitly on a right track mate ! Just keep up the good work! -------------------- For GMC support please email support (at) guitarmasterclass.net
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