British Metal Collab 3 |
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Jan 27 2013, 05:05 PM
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QUOTE (Jouve @ Jan 27 2013, 03:48 PM)  That's a nice take. Some of my noobish remarks: 1.I think you should work on the overall feel- you have cool ideas. Try to think about your solo as a whole, not a separate licks. 2.Some timing issues 3.I like the beginning of the chorus very much. 4.A very strange bend on 0:55. As for me it's out of pitch. It's good. Keep rocking! They're not noobish at all Jouve!  Personally, I thought that I'd bent that note a little too high myself, but my ears were tired so I thought it must be only me. But I re recorded it, I think I solved the problem https://soundcloud.com/sam-ryan-stormrage/british-metal-collab-3 |
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Jan 27 2013, 05:20 PM
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Yes it sounds better.
This post has been edited by Jouve: Jan 27 2013, 05:21 PM |
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Jan 27 2013, 06:55 PM
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QUOTE (enlo22 @ Jan 26 2013, 02:12 PM) i was thinking about it, is it necessary or no? cause i still have to improve this one lol It would be great it you can record something over it, but if not, there is no problem, I can edit the backing.  QUOTE (Grace @ Jan 27 2013, 06:17 AM) Here's my audio take https://soundcloud.com/get-7-1/british-metal-3-collab-w https://soundcloud.com/get-7-1/british-metal-3-collab-guitar I'm impressed Grace! An you said that you wasn't sure to join!! You take is VERY good!! Thanks for joining. QUOTE (HungryForHeaven @ Jan 27 2013, 06:37 AM) I like this take. It's rhythmic, the tone is superb and the harmonies sound way cool. Will you shoot two videos? :-) I just realized that this was my first post in this thread.. So I guess I can't hide anymore, pretending I didn't see it. There will be something posted in due time, I hope.  hehehe a collab can''t be finished without two takes: 1. The German Guy's take 2. HFH's Duet  -------------------- My lessons
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Jan 27 2013, 07:18 PM
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QUOTE (Gabriel Leopardi @ Jan 27 2013, 06:55 PM) 2. HFH's Duet What? Does it really HAVE TO be a duet? 
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Jan 27 2013, 07:30 PM
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QUOTE (sammetal92 @ Jan 27 2013, 01:05 PM) They're not noobish at all Jouve! Personally, I thought that I'd bent that note a little too high myself, but my ears were tired so I thought it must be only me. But I re recorded it, I think I solved the problem https://soundcloud.com/sam-ryan-stormrage/british-metal-collab-3 It's great how much you improved your take comparing this one with the previous one! It sounds much better, the composition and also your playing. This take could work for the collab, but if you still want to improve it, concentrate even more on timing, and expression (vibrato and bending). Also I feel that your guitar is a bit out of tune in the last melodies... -------------------- My lessons
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Jan 27 2013, 08:25 PM
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QUOTE (Grace @ Jan 27 2013, 04:17 AM) Here's my audio take https://soundcloud.com/get-7-1/british-metal-3-collab-w https://soundcloud.com/get-7-1/british-metal-3-collab-guitar Is this the same young lady that was saying she couldn't do some if these collabs? I'm confused...  That was Killer!
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Jan 27 2013, 08:35 PM
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QUOTE (mroberts70 @ Jan 27 2013, 04:25 PM) Is this the same young lady that was saying she couldn't do some if these collabs? I'm confused... That was Killer!hehehe me too... -------------------- My lessons
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Jan 27 2013, 09:16 PM
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QUOTE (sammetal92 @ Jan 27 2013, 04:40 PM) I'll see if I can improve it enough in time, otherwise if you will have it in the collab, it'll work for me ok!
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Jan 28 2013, 05:17 AM
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Nice one GRACE!!!! This is shaping up to be KILLER collab!
QUOTE (Grace @ Jan 27 2013, 04:17 AM) Here's my audio take https://soundcloud.com/get-7-1/british-metal-3-collab-w https://soundcloud.com/get-7-1/british-metal-3-collab-guitar |
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You guys rock! Keep posting awesome take!
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Jan 28 2013, 06:45 AM
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QUOTE (mroberts70 @ Jan 28 2013, 05:17 AM) Plus I could see that dark side you were talkin about the other day... That's what I was thinking don't steal my thoughts man 
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Jan 28 2013, 07:28 AM
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I just didn't wanna have too much and then have it be all sloppy loll
QUOTE (Gabriel Leopardi @ Jan 27 2013, 05:55 PM) It would be great it you can record something over it, but if not, there is no problem, I can edit the backing. I'm impressed Grace! An you said that you wasn't sure to join!! You take is VERY good!! Thanks for joining. hehehe a collab can''t be finished without two takes: 1. The German Guy's take 2. HFH's Duet ok guys, here's my solo mixed into it! tell me your thoughts etc.. https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=_xi-yztH2LA...eature=youtu.be this is my first collab so i'm exited about it ! hope i can get the files to go through i wihs i wasn't as computer illiterate lol
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Jan 28 2013, 07:31 AM
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QUOTE (enlo22 @ Jan 28 2013, 07:28 AM) ok guys, here's my solo mixed into it! tell me your thoughts etc.. https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=_xi-yztH2LA...eature=youtu.be Sounds good, man. The mini trill at the very end is brilliant!
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Jan 28 2013, 07:40 AM
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QUOTE (enlo22 @ Jan 28 2013, 06:28 AM) I just didn't wanna have too much and then have it be all sloppy loll ok guys, here's my solo mixed into it! tell me your thoughts etc.. https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=_xi-yztH2LA...eature=youtu.be this is my first collab so i'm exited about it ! hope i can get the files to go through i wihs i wasn't as computer illiterate lolepiiiccccc! |
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Jan 28 2013, 09:34 AM
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Something like this.
 https://soundcloud.com/jouveivan/british-metal-mix https://soundcloud.com/jouveivan/british-metal-guitar |
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