Composition Feedback Request |
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Composition Feedback Request |
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Oct 28 2013, 02:03 PM |
Hello guys,
I would be happy to have your feedback, your advice/criticize on the last composition I've just made this week end. It is a kind of a jazzy/dark/weird ballad. I can't give you a style, as it is an original output of my weird harmonical brain. It is the first song I compose that is not metalish. Here it is : solo_1113_5_1_.mp3 ( 9.27MB ) Number of downloads: 218 I would appreciate all kind of criticize, especially on the structure of the song. Feel free to tell what you think, that's what I am looking for! See you guys. Thanks in advance! Arthur |
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Oct 28 2013, 02:06 PM |
that is awesome, I love the style and atmosphere. Well done mate.
-------------------- When your fingers bleed you're getting somewhere
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Oct 28 2013, 02:57 PM |
I love this dark mood!!! I like all song but the part that start at 1:14 sounds really cool |
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Oct 28 2013, 03:20 PM |
Hi Arthur! This is a very cool track. I like the overall atmosphere that it creates, it sounds like a soundtrack. The only thing that I can say is that the song could have a more explosive sections, or if that's not the idea that it could be shorter. It's a bit repetitive in some moments.
Besides that, everything is great! Well done! -------------------- My lessons
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Oct 28 2013, 03:23 PM |
Very mic song, I liked the ambient and dark mood of the song. Is it instrumental or are you going to add vocals, I imagined a couple of singing melodies while I was listening.
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Oct 28 2013, 04:19 PM |
Gabriel Leopardi, I think you are right, that is also my feel. I feel that there is a bit too much repetitivity, and I need to place some riff in between repetitive riffs. I am not really used to composing short songs, so I think that I will try and incorporate some explosive parts, as you say. Maybe slow and loud distorted rythmic, to add some brutality I will try and do that! If you have specific ideas in mind, tell me more! yeah, that was exactly what I meant. I'm not sure who, (I think that gitarrero) posted this band at the site and I think that it's a good example of how you can make explode a post-rock song: -------------------- My lessons
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Oct 28 2013, 04:29 PM |
I posted it Gab. Yes when I heard your song it reminded me a lot to Frames. Ah! you were the one that made me love this band! -------------------- My lessons
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Oct 29 2013, 02:10 PM |
Oh, seeing your link, I knew I would like it before listening. Indeed I love it ! This is awesome. I am gonna listen to it and see if I can immerse myself in that style. By the way, I don't know any post-rock band like that. But obviously, I love it. I would appreciate if you could advice me some more, with this kind of mood/atmosphere ! Well, I don't know too many bands like the one that I posted, bands that combine post rock with powerful sections. But some of my favourite bands in this style or that incorporate this style in their music are: Explosions in the sky, Mogwai, The Best Pessimist, Steven Wilson, Buckethead, Sigur Ros. Check each of these bands, they are amazing! -------------------- My lessons
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Oct 30 2013, 08:44 AM |
Here is a new version:
solo_1113_7.mp3 ( 12.15MB ) Number of downloads: 145 I changed a little bit the structure, and I add some parts. There is still some work to do, Ihave not had enough time so far See you guys |
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Oct 30 2013, 04:28 PM |
Hi mate!! I'm starting to love this piece of music. I like how you managed dynamics and arrangements in this new version. I enjoyed listening to the whole track now! I love the clean atmospheres but I also enjoy a lot the most powerful sections. Congratulations!!
This is not very close to your song but wanted to share another musician that I discovered on a thread here at GMC. It's instrumental guitar music but very MUSICAL. Inspiring. -------------------- My lessons
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