Gary Moore Tribute Collaboration, Instructors/Students Video Collaboration |
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Gary Moore Tribute Collaboration, Instructors/Students Video Collaboration |
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Mar 21 2014, 09:40 PM |
Hi guys, i couldn't resist a collab over a Piotr backing. Didn't turned out Moore-ish, but this is what i came up with so far. Hope you guys like it like it? I love this man! It's a beautiful solo with a lot of feeling and perfect tone and dynamics! Your rock friend. Thanks for joining!! I'm in if there's still some space for me! There's enough time for me to create something fun for this collab! So many, very good versions already here! You must join this one mate! You rocked the previous collab, why would you miss Gary Moore's tribute?? Gary Moore is/was a great guitar player. I feel like I should join to honour him if you know what I mean. Can I still join? yes, you must join! -------------------- My lessons
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Mar 21 2014, 09:48 PM |
-------------------- I'd rather have a full Bottle in front of me than a full Frontal Lobotomy!!
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Mar 21 2014, 10:25 PM |
Awesome!!!!!!!! I like it very, very, very, very much |
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Mar 22 2014, 03:14 PM |
This is shaping up great Neil! Around 0:14 there was a bit of a timing scramble Put some more pulse in that phrase and all should be great! |
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Mar 22 2014, 10:35 PM |
So, I've re-worked the slow one a bit:-
https://soundcloud.com/neilwaller/gary-moore-sad-take-3 I know that last bend was a bit flat but this isn't the final take!! -------------------- I'd rather have a full Bottle in front of me than a full Frontal Lobotomy!!
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Mar 23 2014, 10:30 AM |
So, I've re-worked the slow one a bit:- https://soundcloud.com/neilwaller/gary-moore-sad-take-3 I know that last bend was a bit flat but this isn't the final take!! Hey Neil! This one is shaping up great as well! I'd focus a bit on the ascending and descending runs towards the end, so that I may give them a little bit of pulse! |
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Mar 23 2014, 07:17 PM |
Hi Guys,
This is the basic idea I'm working on. Not the final take, just an idea https://soundcloud.com/jeroen-van-der-put/gmc-gary-moore-tribute -------------------- My Youtube channel: https://www.youtube.com/user/SparrowLesPaul
Download my music for free: http://jeroenvanderput.bandcamp.com/album/...tal-heavy-metal Listen to my first mini album "Victory" on Soundcloud: https://soundcloud.com/jeroen-van-der-put/s...tory-mini-album My facebook page: https://www.facebook.com/JeroenOnFire |
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Mar 24 2014, 07:00 AM |
Hi Guys, This is the basic idea I'm working on. Not the final take, just an idea https://soundcloud.com/jeroen-van-der-put/gmc-gary-moore-tribute Cool Ideas Jeroen! Love that growling bend at 12 seconds in! |
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Mar 24 2014, 12:26 PM |
Hey Jeroen! Nice take man! I'd bring in a bit more dynamic in the phrasing after 0:24 as it is too static at the moment and also watch out for the bends, so that you may reach the desired pitch Keep that first bend - that one is PERFECT! Here's my take 2 that I'm working on. https://soundcloud.com/jeroen-van-der-put/gmc-gary-moore-tribute-take2 -------------------- My Youtube channel: https://www.youtube.com/user/SparrowLesPaul
Download my music for free: http://jeroenvanderput.bandcamp.com/album/...tal-heavy-metal Listen to my first mini album "Victory" on Soundcloud: https://soundcloud.com/jeroen-van-der-put/s...tory-mini-album My facebook page: https://www.facebook.com/JeroenOnFire |
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Mar 24 2014, 12:49 PM |
Here's my take 2 that I'm working on. https://soundcloud.com/jeroen-van-der-put/gmc-gary-moore-tribute-take2 Hi mate! This take sounds much better than the previous one. Your bending is more precise now. If you want to continue improving it, I would work a bit more in the phrasing. I think that it starts ok but the overall idea is a bit repetitive, you should take one of the 4 phrases and change a bit the rhythm, or at least don't use bending, to make it sound different. When I'm composing a solo and I have a recording, I mark the stronger sections and the weaker ones, those parts that I love and those that are there just to fill the space. I use to mute the weaker parts and try to work on new ones. I repeat this process many times until I get something that I believe is 100% strong. So, I've re-worked the slow one a bit:- https://soundcloud.com/neilwaller/gary-moore-sad-take-3 I know that last bend was a bit flat but this isn't the final take!! Hi mate! The take is getting close. I like the first phrasings, the first half. I think that the second half needs definition, there are many scale patterns but it seems that there is nothing more happening there, there is a main phrase lacking there. Those patterns are good connectors but try to define the phrases between them. -------------------- My lessons
Do you need a Guitar Plan? Join Gab's Army Check my band:Cirse Check my soundcloud:Soundcloud Please subscribe to my:Youtube Channel |
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Mar 24 2014, 01:45 PM |
Hi mate! This take sounds much better than the previous one. Your bending is more precise now. If you want to continue improving it, I would work a bit more in the phrasing. I think that it starts ok but the overall idea is a bit repetitive, you should take one of the 4 phrases and change a bit the rhythm, or at least don't use bending, to make it sound different. When I'm composing a solo and I have a recording, I mark the stronger sections and the weaker ones, those parts that I love and those that are there just to fill the space. I use to mute the weaker parts and try to work on new ones. I repeat this process many times until I get something that I believe is 100% strong. Thanks Gab, I'll work on it to make it stronger. -------------------- My Youtube channel: https://www.youtube.com/user/SparrowLesPaul
Download my music for free: http://jeroenvanderput.bandcamp.com/album/...tal-heavy-metal Listen to my first mini album "Victory" on Soundcloud: https://soundcloud.com/jeroen-van-der-put/s...tory-mini-album My facebook page: https://www.facebook.com/JeroenOnFire |
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