Hi mate! When do you think that you'll have the vocal files?

Am I ok until Thursday Gab?
That'll be the main Vocal and both Rap pats and accompanying Videos!


Plus some little overdubs too!!

This post has been edited by Sensible Jones: Sep 5 2017, 07:58 PM

Ok! You are our frontman so I'll wait for you before giving shape to this one.

OK, here's what I have:-
https://soundcloud.com/neilwaller/chester-final-vox-full

Here's the 2 Raps:-
https://soundcloud.com/neilwaller/sj-rap
https://soundcloud.com/neilwaller/phil-rap
Phil, I had to cut a part out of yours to make it scan properly!

I will upload the individual parts with no Backing Track tomorrow Gab. My Internet is very slow tonight!
Will also upload relevant Videos too. I have a day off so plenty of time to do so!!

Just realised that the last part has past 'clipping' point, do you want me to re-record that part?

This post has been edited by Sensible Jones: Sep 7 2017, 11:41 PM

Hi SJ! That's very promising! The clipping is very extreme and it becomes a problem in the chorus. Is it possible to re-record those parts?

No probs Gab, will have it in a couple of hours or so!

Sound files with re-recorded 4th part!
https://soundcloud.com/neilwaller/vox-pt-1-nbt
https://soundcloud.com/neilwaller/vox-pt-2-nbt
https://soundcloud.com/neilwaller/vox-pt-3-nbt
https://soundcloud.com/neilwaller/vox-pt-4-nbt
https://soundcloud.com/neilwaller/overdubs-nbt

Video file for the complete Lyric plus the two Rap parts!




If you need anything else let me know Gab!!

Forgot the Lyrics for you Gab!!!

The Struggle Inside.

So, here am I,
Trapped inside my mind.
All around seems fine
until I step outside.

My brave facade is crumbling down,
Now my inner self has lost his shiny Crown,
Trying to hide behind a fading smile,
With these Demons I've had for a while.

This is where it starts
To fall apart

And as my mind starts to scream,
It feels like nothing is as it seems,
Everything that I took for real,
All the mad emotions that I feel,
Reality starts to drift away,
Find it hard to face another day,
With a heavy heart and a weeping eye,
This will be my final 'Goodbye'.

Then SJ Rap:-
I'm isolated,
It can never change,
My Normality,
Others think it strange,
There's a piece of me,
That's lost inside,
The Darkest Place,
Where I cannot hide.

Just 4 High Walls,
Like being in a Cage,
I can see the Book,
But can't read the Page,
In a Monsters Lair,
I can't break free,
Then I realise,
That the Monster is me.

And finally Phil Rap:-
Trapped in my head
I need to escape
I need to get out
Of this mental rape
Like a caged beast
My soul is destroyed
Happiness no more
Or am I paranoid

What's in my head
Wearing me down
Stuck in my fears
Making me drown
In my tortured mind
I die in my head
I feel no more
I NEED to be dead............................................................................
..

Great job SJ!! Thanks a lot friend! I'll give my best to build a killer song with this one.

No worries Gab! I'm looking forward to see how it all comes together under your Magical Master Mixing Touch!!!


This post has been edited by Sensible Jones: Sep 10 2017, 06:50 PM

Working!

That looks like a Screenshot of my Cakewalk file for this project when I had all my rough Takes still on it!!

hahaha, yeah, there is a lot of great stuff on this one. I think that we have a new hit. News are coming soon...

I'm really looking forward to this one!!!

Here's what mine ended up looking like:-

Hey guys! I would like to know your thoughts about this structure! I still have to do some levels and EQ adjustments with fresh ears.

I've been working hard to make this one be the cooler possible for listeners, so that's why I've only used the strong parts regarding solos and vocals, trying to get a powerful hit. However, I want your opinion as you are also the writers here.

 LP_collab_pre_mix.mp3 ( 3.19MB ) Number of downloads: 68

It's all good to me Gab I think it could do with some rap though but I am way way too shy

You should start adding some vocals for collabs! You could start with backing vocals as an experiment and I can give you feedback to give shape to your voice.

Just a reminder for all participants! Please keep the audio of your videos to let me sync the mix with your playback for the videoclip!

I having a hard time trying to put all SJ vids in sync. Fingers crossed that I'll have the final vid today.

This post has been edited by Gabriel Leopardi: Sep 13 2017, 03:56 PM

UPLOADING!

Here we go!! Thanks and congrats everybody! I hope that you like it.