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Posted by: kjutte Aug 2 2008, 06:49 PM

Tell me what you think smile.gif
I know that the sound could be better, and the creativity could be higher tongue.gif Mind you it's improv smile.gif

 Gmaj_jam.mp3 ( 2.06MB ) : 241
 

Posted by: Rated Htr Aug 2 2008, 07:12 PM

It's great...beautiful job you've done...I can feel your vibe =)

Posted by: kjutte Aug 2 2008, 07:46 PM

QUOTE (Rated Htr @ Aug 2 2008, 08:12 PM) *
It's great...beautiful job you've done...I can feel your vibe =)


Thanks alot man smile.gif

Posted by: Caelumamittendum Aug 2 2008, 08:28 PM

It's cool, man! I like it!

Mind if I take a shot at it too? smile.gif

Posted by: skennington Aug 2 2008, 08:44 PM

I thought it was cool as well, great job! smile.gif

Posted by: Tjchep Aug 5 2008, 04:38 AM

Nice chops man. smile.gif

Impressive stuff also.

Posted by: Bogdan Radovic Aug 5 2008, 11:22 PM

Excelent improv man ! Cool phrasing ! You may want to check out my new http://www.guitarmasterclass.net/guitar_forum/index.php?showtopic=18242 - its in the same key smile.gif

Posted by: JeroenKole Aug 5 2008, 11:32 PM

very nice:)

Only thing that should be improved is the sound quality in my opinion? Are you using something like a pod or a mic infront of the amp?

Posted by: Daniel Robinson Aug 5 2008, 11:32 PM

Excellent job man!

One advice i would give is pay more attention to letting the music breath. Even in Improvisation.

There are times when it felt like you were trying to cram everything you know into one phrase. Good phrasing comes with practice just as much as scale use and all the other tools of guitar.

You can say just as much with silence in the right places as you can with a million notes.


You have great tone, and good note choices and quite a few good rhythmic ideas, now try to figure out how to string them together in a way that will invoke emotion in yourself and others. There were a couple magic moments like that in this improv you just have to refine it.


Daniel

Posted by: Ivan Milenkovic Aug 7 2008, 12:05 PM

It sounds cool, the track is little bassy, and if you are soloing guitar should be slightly more in front of the track. Playing is good, nice licks, you lack phrasing and structure in solo, but technique is quite good. Keep rockin man.

Posted by: kjutte Aug 9 2008, 11:58 PM

Thanks for the kind words!

I'll try to use more pauses next time, thanks Daniel, I get what you mean!

Also, yes, I am a real newbie to recording. My app wouldn't let me convert to MP3 so the file ended up 80mb unless I really messed the quality up.

Edit for language - Smells

Posted by: Nemanja Filipovic Aug 10 2008, 11:03 AM

Very nice man,beautiful phrasing,I think that lead guitar should be one or two db louder,but besides that every thing is cool and clean.

Posted by: superpanda Aug 12 2008, 04:40 PM

I liked it a lot. There were a couple really cool parts, but, there was also a couple parts where I was a little overwhelmed.

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