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Sami View Member Profile	Jun 1 2008, 09:49 PM
Jun 1 2008, 09:49 PM	Learning Rock Star Posts: 293 Joined: 11-December 07 From: New York	So im writing a song for this multi-genre piece i have due in my ap comp class. While starting on a draft i noticed ive never written lyrics before. The topic is death and how it has playied a role in my life. This is because my father died when i was 8, and it is an event that has radically changed who i am. I was wondering if you guys could help me write this, Thanks! Heres my start I Though it would be a day like any other I woke up as me I coulda swore this is how it would be Until I heard that he had left me, my brother, and my mother That day the darkness over came me And unleashed a beast that isnt tame I knew life would never seem the same Why did he leave that day Even though they cared Even though they were there for me I wouldn't even dare To show them what was eating at me I saw the ones I loved cry I couldn't understand why I was left to blame myself That day the darkness over came me And unleashed a beast that isnt tame I knew life would never seem the same Why did he leave that days You are at GuitarMasterClass.net Don't miss today's free lick. Plus all our lessons are packed with free content! Don't miss today's free blues, jazz & country licks. Plus all our lessons are packed with free content! -------------------- QUOTE (OrganisedConfusion @ Jun 10 2008, 01:38 PM) Crysis kicked arse. Gears of War unfortunately I thought was as good as wiping cottage cheese on a cat's head Hahahaha just imagine the cat hahahah QUOTE (fkalich @ May 3 2009, 08:01 PM) The thing about being really stupid, is that there are a zillion ways to be a moron. There are usually several ways to be intelligent, given a situation, but it is a small finite number. But there are always a zillion ways to be to blithering idiot. So finding a new way to have the intellect of an artichoke is nothing to be proud of really, it is easy to do. So true... To bad im still an artichoke haha

Nemanja Filipovi... Nemanja Filipovic View Member Profile	Jun 1 2008, 10:50 PM
Jun 1 2008, 10:50 PM	Singing Instructor Posts: 3.391 Joined: 23-January 08	Hey Sami,this is beautiful.I really haw nothing to add,as long you speak from your hart things will always haw the power to touch other souls. You are at GuitarMasterClass.net Don't miss today's free lick. Plus all our lessons are packed with free content! Don't miss today's free blues, jazz & country licks. Plus all our lessons are packed with free content! -------------------- Check out my video lessons and instructor board! Participate im my new Crazy Blues Collaboration

Sami View Member Profile	Jun 1 2008, 11:23 PM
Jun 1 2008, 11:23 PM	Learning Rock Star Posts: 293 Joined: 11-December 07 From: New York	QUOTE (Nemanja Filipovic @ Jun 1 2008, 10:50 PM) Hey Sami,this is beautiful.I really haw nothing to add,as long you speak from your hart things will always haw the power to touch other souls. Thanks Nemanja, ive never tried this before, its great. I was thinking that the "That day the darkness over came me.." would be the main part, im jsut wondering whats a good structure for the brigdes and chorus of a song, etc. Thanks You are at GuitarMasterClass.net Don't miss today's free lick. Plus all our lessons are packed with free content! Don't miss today's free blues, jazz & country licks. Plus all our lessons are packed with free content! -------------------- QUOTE (OrganisedConfusion @ Jun 10 2008, 01:38 PM) Crysis kicked arse. Gears of War unfortunately I thought was as good as wiping cottage cheese on a cat's head Hahahaha just imagine the cat hahahah QUOTE (fkalich @ May 3 2009, 08:01 PM) The thing about being really stupid, is that there are a zillion ways to be a moron. There are usually several ways to be intelligent, given a situation, but it is a small finite number. But there are always a zillion ways to be to blithering idiot. So finding a new way to have the intellect of an artichoke is nothing to be proud of really, it is easy to do. So true... To bad im still an artichoke haha

Ivan Milenkovic View Member Profile	Jun 2 2008, 12:30 AM
Jun 2 2008, 12:30 AM	Instructor Posts: 25.396 Joined: 20-November 07 From: Belgrade, Serbia	Beautiful song, sad but honest and beautiful. I recommend using this order: Verse 1 Chorus 1 Verse 2 Bridge Chorus 2 Maybe even add a small solo between the bridge and the last chorus or try to repeat the last chorus twice. You are at GuitarMasterClass.net Don't miss today's free lick. Plus all our lessons are packed with free content! Don't miss today's free blues, jazz & country licks. Plus all our lessons are packed with free content! -------------------- - Ivan's Video Chat Lesson Notes HERE - Check out my GMC Profile and Lessons - (Please subscribe to my) YouTube Official Channel - Let's be connected through ! Facebook! :)

Bogdan Radovic View Member Profile	Jun 2 2008, 12:35 PM
Jun 2 2008, 12:35 PM	Bass & Beginner Instructor Posts: 15.614 Joined: 30-November 07 From: Belgrade, Serbia	Beautiful stuff , really touching... Ivan suggested nice arrangement..Just make an intro to the song and continue same progression over the verse.. You are at GuitarMasterClass.net Don't miss today's free lick. Plus all our lessons are packed with free content! Don't miss today's free blues, jazz & country licks. Plus all our lessons are packed with free content! -------------------- For GMC support please email support (at) guitarmasterclass.net Check out my lessons and my instructor board. Check out my beginner guitar lessons course! ; Take a bass course now!

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