Its not just you your hurting,
Theres another one your deserting.
You both just live your life,
As I shut myself inside,
Of this room,
I can not hide.
Do you feel it now ?
When you run away I worry,
As my eyes start to get blurry.
Your scaring me right now!
But neither of you see,
All this pain that stays with me,
You have no idea
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Chorus: It gets dark in this home,
Sometimes I really feel alone.
And when theres noone else there,
Its These Words I have to share.
I have to share.
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© John Minoia 2009
Unfinished piece with music, will come back and add more.
[quote name='Eat-Sleep-andJam' date='Apr 3 2009, 02:30 AM' post='363172']
Its not just you your hurting,
Theres another one your deserting.
You both just live your life,
As I shut myself inside,
Of this room,
I can not hide.
Don't like the first rhyme, seems to forced when there are far better words I would apply IMO, like abandoning.
...
The rage of seeing someone else with whom you love makes you wanna hate both people doesn't it?
Do you feel it now ?
When you run away I worry,
As my eyes start to get blurry.
Your scaring me right now!
But neither of you see,
All this pain that stays with me,
You have no idea
...Than again, you don't like the fact of seeing your loved one ignoring you or starting to pay less attention to you because of being in love, people just live their hapiness because that's all that matters to them, self-centered punks.
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Chorus: It gets dark in this home,
Sometimes I really feel alone.
And when theres noone else there,
Its These Words I have to share.
I have to share.
When people are in the dark, they need someone besides them, to listen to their version, to understand them and what they are going through.
Overall, I feel sorry you feel that way...
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