New Song Feat. Keiko Takamura Any Feedback Welcomed! |
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New Song Feat. Keiko Takamura Any Feedback Welcomed! |
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Nov 17 2021, 04:09 PM |
The choruses are good but the verses are definitely pitchy - both sharp and flat in places.
What bugs me more though is that the 'feel' (rhythmically) isn't locked with the drum groove. -------------------- - Ken Lasaine
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Nov 18 2021, 02:42 AM |
I used some pitch correction on the main verses and I'm hoping it sorts thing a bit. Also heated up the drums a pinch. VERSION 2!!!
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Nov 18 2021, 03:59 PM |
The second verse is sounding good but the 1st verse still has some issues.
Can you have her re-record - ? -------------------- - Ken Lasaine
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Nov 18 2021, 08:57 PM |
I can't pick up on the pitch issues but to me, on my system, it sounds quite bass heavy and the vocal is drowning in the mix most of the time.
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Nov 19 2021, 08:35 AM |
Like others have said the 1st verse phrasing/timing is off, unlike the 2nd verse. The words really need to hit right on the appropriate beat in a staccato way
This might be a result of doing the song faster than the original. The I don't wanna be here no more is bugging me too, I think the 'I' is shorter and less emphasized in the original, I guess I have the original burnt into my brain since childhood, so it may not really matter The last chorus harmony needs work on pitch as does the outro vocal Fancy sending me the backing I'd love to have a crack at it, as part of my vocal practice -------------------- My SoundCloud
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Nov 20 2021, 12:21 AM |
Thanks for the feedback! I am having the same issue with hearing the original vocal in my head. I keep wanting a very similar performane as the choppy delivery in the original is what makes it work so well. Happy to shoot you the backing. If you would like to take a stab at the vocal id love to hear it!! we have tried a rock guy and then keiko so far.
Wouldn_t_it_Be_Good_poster_boy.mp3 ( 8.12MB ) Number of downloads: 124 Like others have said the 1st verse phrasing/timing is off, unlike the 2nd verse. The words really need to hit right on the appropriate beat in a staccato way This might be a result of doing the song faster than the original. The I don't wanna be here no more is bugging me too, I think the 'I' is shorter and less emphasized in the original, I guess I have the original burnt into my brain since childhood, so it may not really matter The last chorus harmony needs work on pitch as does the outro vocal Fancy sending me the backing I'd love to have a crack at it, as part of my vocal practice |
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