QUOTE (xSK8ANx @ Sep 11 2007, 10:06 PM)
Hi:)
I just wanted to share my first song with you folks.
It´s not really finished and the drums just suck cause I don´t have a propper drumsoftware or drums (if so, I would have played the drums myself)
But, I will but out a final version as soon as I get some drums;)
And don´t get picky on the playing and timing... cause I know that´s somthing I´ve gotta work alot on;)
Thanks
Kjetil
PS: I´d love some feedback;)
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Well it had a nice feel and was well constructed. The solo's in there seemed a bit short and I feel as you improve you could add more to it and possibly switch some of them around because the last solo seemed a bit out of place
. As for the general sound of the song, It sounded a bit over distorted, which I think kind of blocks out the different riffs and licks.
I think the ending would have sounded really sweet if you just kept up with that acoustic exotic sound and ended it like that
But overall nice job !
You first song is a nice one!
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This post has been edited by Eat-Sleep-andJam: Sep 12 2007, 07:26 AM