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GMC Forum _ REC _ Purple Hayes - Neoclassical Etude #1

Posted by: purple hayes May 26 2009, 02:20 AM

Original Lesson: http://www.guitarmasterclass.net/solo-guitar/neoclassical-etude-1/

Gear: MIM Strat, POD X3 Live, Reaper, Logitech QuickCam Pro 9000, Sony Vegas

Notes:: This was recorded on the same day as the Tapping & Legato submission, but I took a break to shower and change clothes.

Posted by: Emir Hot May 28 2009, 07:09 PM

Rhythm placement 3,9
Cleanness 4
Feel 4,5
Posture 4,5
Sound 4

Many of the phrases were not rhytmicaly precise. There is something good about this take and that's your control and confidence. You need to clean up the rest and it would sound great. I can see that you don't need much until you get there. Well done

Posted by: Muris Varajic May 28 2009, 11:38 PM

Rhythm placement 3.8
Cleanness 4
Feel 4.5
Posture 4
Sound 4

Yeah, as Emir said it needs some polishing but you have
great attitude and it's just a matter of time.

Posted by: Pedja Simovic May 29 2009, 09:37 AM

Rhythm placement 4.5
Cleanness 4.5
Feel 5
Posture 5
Sound 4

Great job Purple Hayes.

I really enjoyed it. You captured feel of the lesson perfectly. There were parts where you ate some notes or didn't pick them in time (hands not 100% in sync for this one yet).
I believe if you play it for a day or two more you will get all fives.

Great job overall man, keep up the good work!

Posted by: Marcus Siepen May 29 2009, 11:45 AM

I also agree about the fine tuning of timing, but you should be able to solve this in no time, very nice take.

Rhythm placement 3,5
Cleanness 4
Feel 4,5
Posture 4,5
Sound 4

Posted by: Marcus Lavendell May 29 2009, 04:17 PM

Rhythm placement 3,5
Cleanness 4
Feel 5
Posture 5
Sound 4,8

I agree with the others about the timing. But, as Emir said, you have good confidence and attitude - which is great! I also like that you use small finger movements with your fret hand - You show potential to reach extreme speeds, imo. But watch out for playing sloppy. Practice a bit slower and more accurate for a while and keep those small finger movements, and you'll be there in no time!

I really enjoyed watching you play this. Great job!

Oh, one small thing: The first trill should be on the note D up to E (fret 10 to 12 on the high E-string).

Posted by: skennington May 29 2009, 11:04 PM

84.88% on this cool lesson man, well done! (pass)