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GMC Forum _ REC _ Take 7: Modern Heavy Rock Riffs II

Posted by: Rammikin May 8 2014, 08:37 PM

Original lesson: http://www.guitarmasterclass.net/ls/Modern-Heavy-Rock-Riffs-II/

Links to previous attempts at this lesson:
http://guitarmasterclass.net/guitar_forum/index.php?showtopic=50537
http://guitarmasterclass.net/guitar_forum/index.php?showtopic=50871
http://guitarmasterclass.net/guitar_forum/index.php?showtopic=51521

Posted by: Marius Pop May 8 2014, 11:28 PM

Hello mate, nice riffs you've got there, nice tone.
I think you should focus more in the timing.Sometimes you are a little bit rushed, stay with the groove.
Next time try not to rush the foot pulse, because your foot become your inner metronome witch should be synchronised with the music you play.
Anyway you did a great job

Posted by: Bogdan Radovic May 11 2014, 02:03 PM

Bump up the list

Posted by: Cosmin Lupu May 11 2014, 02:54 PM

Hello mate!

As Marius said, the groove could be tighter, but I think you made nice progress here - it's much cleaner and well interpreted than in the previous takes! Keep up the good work!

Cosmin

Posted by: Gabriel Leopardi May 11 2014, 07:17 PM

Hi Ram! You are a really hard worker and I can see really important results! As Cosmin and Marius said, there is still room to improve rhythm but your take starts to sound clearer, more defined and tighter. You are definitely on the right track. Keep on working with the comments that we have been giving you in REC and you will be ready having a 10 take.

Keep rocking!

Posted by: Fran May 15 2014, 10:11 AM

Pass: 8