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Posted by: botoxfox Sep 17 2007, 02:07 AM

This is a composition I made in in GP. It took me 15 minutes, so I wouldn't call it great music, but I kinda like it.

Posted by: botoxfox Sep 22 2007, 05:39 AM

Comments?

Posted by: shredmandan Sep 22 2007, 05:46 AM

I know how you feel i hate when people wont post on something i made.This kind of confuses me though,as i dont really here any guitar more a bass line and kinda techno thing going on.It's not really what im into but maybe record some guitar playing over it.Just took me off guard as i was expecting to here some type of guitar playing.

Posted by: DeepRoots Sep 22 2007, 05:48 AM

hey thats pretty cool. I cant wait to hear that with some proper instruments.
Just one point though- i think its a cool idea, but i think you repeated the same thing about 3 times was it? After i heard the slowish bit through and then heard the first flurry of notes i was expecting something else to happen with the music- either a new idea being added or the music changing to a completly different idea altogether.
If you took the first bit up to and including the flurry i think you've got yourself a pretty cool intro to a song (or an album maybe?!?! )
Cool stuff, just remember repetition can only be taken so far before interest is lost.

Posted by: botoxfox Sep 22 2007, 05:55 AM

You're right, I was just too lazy and I wanted it longer, so I did the same thing three times over.

Posted by: Iluha Sep 22 2007, 07:49 AM

I just don't know what to say about it