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Posted by: Vulpine Oct 23 2012, 05:52 AM

song I wrote hope you like , would love to know what you guys think

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=3dqOdg3Df0Y&feature=youtu.be

Posted by: Vulpine Oct 26 2012, 03:22 PM

Broken Link! sorry bout that

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=c7BdN3Z7_bo&feature=g-upl

Posted by: Todd Simpson Oct 26 2012, 08:34 PM

Some fine riffing there! Your playing is is good and the pace is nice and even. The tone is working well also. Congrats on a spiff recording! I know it's a huge pain/challenge, but try to get in to multi tracking / DAW (e.g. Reaper etc.) ASAP so you can start putting tracks together with Drums (vst drums work fine) and Bass, so you can create entire arrangments. It's a big step to take but well worth the effort.

Todd

Posted by: vonhotch Oct 27 2012, 02:07 AM

Man you just keep crankin them out. Nice one. I like the tone, of both parts. The second part was pretty trippy I love reverb.

Posted by: Gabriel Leopardi Oct 30 2012, 12:47 AM

Hey mate! This tune is so cool! I like the first part since it sounds like a trip... I feel going to space in that section... and then starts clean section and I fall in love with the track... as we talk in the Army's thread, you have some Buckethead influences but you also have your own music there. I like it a lot.. you just have to adjust the playing in the overall thing and add some other instruments arrangements and you will be ready to sell this one on itunes!

Posted by: Ben Higgins Oct 30 2012, 06:56 PM

I really like this

Both sections have something worth listening to.. they've got their own moods.

One thing wroth mentioning is that when you single out that main riff around 1.06 I really like how you are able to hit those semi harmonics whilst playing a riff. A lot of people struggle to get that but it's really cool that you can do it.

Posted by: Cosmin Lupu Oct 31 2012, 10:10 AM

Uh... I arrived to late I can't access it anymore..

Posted by: Vulpine Oct 31 2012, 04:51 PM

the first link was broken (check out the second post) or click here

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=c7BdN3Z7_bo&feature=g-upl

Posted by: Cosmin Lupu Nov 2 2012, 01:15 PM

Mate! As with all your compositions, the ideas are good, but you have to give them a direction and fluidity

I like both the main riff and the more mellow part coming into play from the middle onwards and I would add that the mellow part would need some more spaciness using effects - reverb, delay mayhaps?

Keep em coming man! They'll get better and better!

Cosmin