Hi i do not know if this is the right forum or not but here is tune i wrote a little while back for my solo project soul release....this is called "blood in the moonlight....all feedback is welcome.......shred on.........Art Caveretta aka pikman
Blood_In_The_Moonlight.mp3 ( 7.96MB )
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Oh, this is very good man, sounds awesome, I like the intro a lot, and riffs and solo are very good! I think you need to work a bit more on the drums, possibly make them a bit more interesting with more fills or something, and the mix is getting muddy once the faster part starts. Other then that, I must say you composed this very good. Solo is really good, with some very good ideas!
I like the way it starts, both guitars go really good together,
I love the clean tone, it's thick
Nice intro riff! reminds of Megadeth a bit, but not really
I like the way it develops, it makes sense to me,
The harmonies are really well done,
I like it ! you are really good!
Pretty good job! thanks for sharing!
I like it! Cool effects! "I see dead people' was great!
I like the intro great clean tone!
Riff is really cool as well!
And man solo is really good! Try to be more melodic and not repeat yourself too much
I would build it up having a melody in the beginning and than bring up shred!
Also I would play riff more staccato like Nuno Bettencourt, to make it more aggressive!
wow ,great tune, it's rocking !
Thank you for all the feed back,it is much appreciated......shred on
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Awesome song overall, although I must say I got really mad when I realised you ENDED the song right when it got to the melodic part, with suspended chords in the background... WHY ?! You could easily make a big melodic section then mirror the song structure to get an outro like the intro... Anyway, what you've already written is great, but would be a shame not to make something more out of it.
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