Pause.breathe. - Kristofer Dahl |
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Nov 16 2008, 07:39 PM
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Hi there - I am excited to show you a tune I am currently working on. It's a little aggressive so "soft-poppers" beware!
 Lyric wise I have been trying to capture the feeling of having way-too-many-things-going-on-at-the same time (I am sure there are many other who share this feeling with me). Also I added some general evilness to the text - to make it a little more metal. ( "  " ...you know  )Any feedback is appreciated! >>Click here to listen! (old mix here) Pause.Breathe. Don't you take what is left of me Don't tell me what I am supposed to be Don't you spill what is left of the weak Don't you pause and don't you breathe Don't confuse our time with hate Don't you dare bloody come too late Please step out, just walk the line Rise from birth and die with time Don't forget to pause, don't forget to breathe Don't forget the everlasting cause! Don't forget to pause, don't forget to breathe Don't you pause and don't you breathe! Pace of death - it's killing you Pace of death is feeding me With control you will let me in With control we will die in sin Doesn't it make sense to cure yourself Doesn't it make sense to heal the world Nothing is free and you will sacrifice yourself A burden on you means a burden off the world Don't forget to pause, don't forget to breathe Don't forget the everlasting cause! Don't forget to pause, don't forget to breathe Don't you pause and don't you breathe! Pause, breathe, pause, breathe, pause, breathe Time to pause? I don't think so! SOLO Don't forget to pause, don't forget to breathe Don't forget the everlasting cause! Don't forget to pause, don't forget to breathe Don't you pause and don't you breathe! This post has been edited by Kristofer Dahl: Nov 21 2008, 06:37 PM |
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Nov 16 2008, 07:45 PM
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Love the riffs and vocal line!!
 Perhaps you could sing this with a bit more "meat and bass" in your voice, just an idea. -------------------- Youtube
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Nov 16 2008, 07:47 PM
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What a great track!
Lyrics were excellent and so was the solo.Quite a few moments reminded me of newer Metallica. -------------------- Guitars: Schecter Stiletto Classic, Jackson SLSMG, Ibanez RG-380 Japan, Gibson Les Paul Studio
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Nov 16 2008, 07:47 PM
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Nice Kris, very thrashy/metallica, chorus is quite stressing actually
 . Nice end with the breathing
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Nov 16 2008, 07:48 PM
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Awesome tune Kris !! I love the chorus , its very cool and catchy!!
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Nov 16 2008, 07:49 PM
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QUOTE (Trond Vold @ Nov 16 2008, 09:47 PM)  What a great track! Lyrics were excellent and so was the solo.Quite a few moments reminded me of newer Metallica. WOW - thanks Trond! 
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Nov 16 2008, 07:52 PM
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QUOTE (Kristofer Dahl @ Nov 16 2008, 07:47 PM) Awesome to get some feedback from you on this Muris! Do you mean on the chorus? - I tried a little but it was insanely hard to sing that fast with the growly voice. I agree that having a low/thick and heavy vocal dub work be really cool though! You're welcome Kris. Actually I was thinking more of the beginning section. Chorus is more or less fine cause you sing pretty higher and fast and that's when voice goes thin anyhow. But for beginning when you sing lower notes I think you might try more mature sound voice,maybe mature is the wrong word. Hmm,maybe less growling and more nature/deep voice.
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Nov 16 2008, 08:10 PM
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QUOTE (Kristofer Dahl @ Nov 16 2008, 07:55 PM) Actually my vocal practicing nowadays only focuses on clean singing - the last two years I have basically just practiced getting the "angry tone" - so I guess the time is here for me to actually learn to nail the notes!  Nooo,notes are fine! It's just less growling and more power,that's my taste tho.
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Nov 16 2008, 08:15 PM
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Wow! This is kickass!
Looking forward to your album
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Nov 16 2008, 08:32 PM
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Cool song.
I personally would have the guitar a bit quiter and the vocals a bit louder, but it was really good.
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Nov 16 2008, 08:40 PM
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Wow, great song!
Though I think after listening to this song a few times you will get mad.
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Nov 16 2008, 08:53 PM
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Kicks asses
! You've got a characteristic way of singing Kris, I like it.
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Nov 16 2008, 09:17 PM
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Love the track Kris... great energy and aggressivness
The chorus is especially cool 
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Nov 16 2008, 09:23 PM
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cool song Kristofer. Nice vocal too
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