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GMC Forum _ REC _ Winter Tune

Posted by: coffeeman Jul 26 2013, 03:37 AM

Original lesson: http://www.guitarmasterclass.net/ls/Winter-Tune/

Posted by: Cosmin Lupu Jul 26 2013, 08:23 AM

Hola amigo!

Too bad you were a bit unsure in the beginning, because the lead part sounds pretty darn good!

The riffs in the beginning though have timing problems and those are the ones you should focus on - make them synch to the strings and kick in the backing and it should be alright - see min 0:12 - 0:34

The vibrato could be a bit wider and there's a note that is slightly off pitch when bent - 01:28

I think that you did a good job here and you almost passed - but you need to take care of that rhythm issue in the beginning in order to get a good grade and make sure that your rhythm skills are in good shape!

Cosmin

Posted by: Darius Wave Jul 26 2013, 02:06 PM

Cosmin is completely right about Your take. Lead part is played very well. I can only suggest You to focus on drums at the beginning because those strings (orchestra) can be distracting. They have this smooth fade in effectwhich can affect the fill of main timming. Try to consider this

Posted by: Gabriel Leopardi Jul 26 2013, 06:28 PM

Hi mate! There is nothing to add to Cosmin comments. He marked each detail that must be worked to have a perfect take. I also think that it's a pity that the power chord section is not tight, this should be fixed easily. Work on those things and record a new REC take!

Keep on the good job.

Posted by: Fran Jul 27 2013, 04:12 PM

Almost there, 7