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Vulpine View Member Profile	Nov 7 2013, 02:41 PM
Nov 7 2013, 02:41 PM	GMC:er Posts: 250 Joined: 6-May 12 From: Wilmington NC	I dont know what im going to name this one yet and I might add some stuff to this track... Felt I coulda did more the 2nd half of this track was eh ok imo but anyway hope u guys enjoy (no improvised licks mostly note for note stuff https://soundcloud.com/vulpinetekneq/untitled You are at GuitarMasterClass.net Don't miss today's free lick. Plus all our lessons are packed with free content! Don't miss today's free blues, jazz & country licks. Plus all our lessons are packed with free content!

Cosmin Lupu View Member Profile	Nov 8 2013, 10:27 AM
Nov 8 2013, 10:27 AM	Instructor Posts: 22.808 Joined: 14-June 10 From: Bucharest	Hey mate! The rhythm playing is almost perfect in the first part, which is of course an improvement in doing justice to your compositions! In the second part though you are delayed in respect to the drum track - please focus on fixing this, as it's a pity not to have the track at full potential..It's very catchy and melodic! You are at GuitarMasterClass.net Don't miss today's free lick. Plus all our lessons are packed with free content! Don't miss today's free blues, jazz & country licks. Plus all our lessons are packed with free content! -------------------- My lessons We can work on YOUR GUITAR and MUSIC development TOGETHER. Write me a private message if you wish to! Please subscribe to my Youtube Channel Days Of Confusion Facebook Page Mozart Rocks My facebook page

Darius Wave View Member Profile	Nov 8 2013, 12:11 PM
Nov 8 2013, 12:11 PM	Instructor Posts: 5.871 Joined: 29-November 12 From: Poland	Nice mood for late evening long walkings Like the abmient guitar part a lot You are at GuitarMasterClass.net Don't miss today's free lick. Plus all our lessons are packed with free content! Don't miss today's free blues, jazz & country licks. Plus all our lessons are packed with free content! -------------------- Check out my lessons and my instructor profile www.facebook.com/DariusWave www.youtube.pl/vavrzyn www.niebonie.pl www.jammingcherry.pl www.facebook.com/druzyna.wawrzyna

Bogdan Radovic View Member Profile	Nov 8 2013, 01:29 PM
Nov 8 2013, 01:29 PM	Bass & Beginner Instructor Posts: 15.614 Joined: 30-November 07 From: Belgrade, Serbia	Very nice song - I think it has a lot of potential! On a first listen these are the details that catch my ears : * Drums are a bit too repetitive and not always compliment the other instruments playing wise * Guitar would need to match the groove and timing of the drums tighter for a stronger impression * Lead lines are cool, watch out for balance between strong notes (chord tones) and ones that make tension for a nice balance. I like the transition to second part where atmosphere gets more open and quiet. An idea : try lowering amount of effects (flanger for example) from the rhythm based guitars - that should help you get a more tight rhythm/sound. You are at GuitarMasterClass.net Don't miss today's free lick. Plus all our lessons are packed with free content! Don't miss today's free blues, jazz & country licks. Plus all our lessons are packed with free content! -------------------- For GMC support please email support (at) guitarmasterclass.net Check out my lessons and my instructor board. Check out my beginner guitar lessons course! ; Take a bass course now!

Vulpine View Member Profile	Nov 8 2013, 03:19 PM
Nov 8 2013, 03:19 PM	GMC:er Posts: 250 Joined: 6-May 12 From: Wilmington NC	QUOTE (Cosmin Lupu @ Nov 8 2013, 09:27 AM) Hey mate! The rhythm playing is almost perfect in the first part, which is of course an improvement in doing justice to your compositions! In the second part though you are delayed in respect to the drum track - please focus on fixing this, as it's a pity not to have the track at full potential..It's very catchy and melodic! Appreciate the feed , Ill go back and correct a few things , uhm when you mentioned the 2nd part were you referring to the part before the "Ambient delayed stuff" or during the end section ? QUOTE (Darius Wave @ Nov 8 2013, 11:11 AM) Nice mood for late evening long walkings Like the abmient guitar part a lot = ) thanks for the feed darius QUOTE (Bogdan Radovic @ Nov 8 2013, 12:29 PM) Very nice song - I think it has a lot of potential! On a first listen these are the details that catch my ears : * Drums are a bit too repetitive and not always compliment the other instruments playing wise * Guitar would need to match the groove and timing of the drums tighter for a stronger impression * Lead lines are cool, watch out for balance between strong notes (chord tones) and ones that make tension for a nice balance. I like the transition to second part where atmosphere gets more open and quiet. An idea : try lowering amount of effects (flanger for example) from the rhythm based guitars - that should help you get a more tight rhythm/sound. THanks Bogdan am working on a software that enalbles me to use my ez drummer so I can stop using the repetitive drum patterns that I have now = ) Regarding Lead Lines and balancing out chord tones and tones that give off tension that I think is a reallly important technicality to have ... been searching for some videos here n there about chord tones would love to learn more regarding stuff like this You are at GuitarMasterClass.net Don't miss today's free lick. Plus all our lessons are packed with free content! Don't miss today's free blues, jazz & country licks. Plus all our lessons are packed with free content!

Cosmin Lupu View Member Profile	Nov 9 2013, 09:05 AM
Nov 9 2013, 09:05 AM	Instructor Posts: 22.808 Joined: 14-June 10 From: Bucharest	Hey mate - the delay part starts in flawed timing most probably even before the drum track kicks in. It is most easily felt when the drums are there though. Have you recorded against a click track and then removed it from the final mix? I mean in the part where there's only the guitar. You are at GuitarMasterClass.net Don't miss today's free lick. Plus all our lessons are packed with free content! Don't miss today's free blues, jazz & country licks. Plus all our lessons are packed with free content! -------------------- My lessons We can work on YOUR GUITAR and MUSIC development TOGETHER. Write me a private message if you wish to! Please subscribe to my Youtube Channel Days Of Confusion Facebook Page Mozart Rocks My facebook page

PosterBoy View Member Profile	Nov 9 2013, 09:12 AM
Nov 9 2013, 09:12 AM	Learning Roadie Posts: 3.179 Joined: 26-October 11 From: Galway, Ireland	As Cosmin said sync the delay tempo to the track bpm if you can. I had to stop listening at that point it made my ears cry. I like the rest of it, and agree with Bogdan about lowering the effect on the Rhythm guitar to make it more focussed. You are at GuitarMasterClass.net Don't miss today's free lick. Plus all our lessons are packed with free content! Don't miss today's free blues, jazz & country licks. Plus all our lessons are packed with free content! -------------------- My SoundCloud Gear Tyler Burning Water 2K Burny RLG90 with BK Emeralds Fender US Tele with BK Piledrivers Epiphone 335 with Suhr Thornbuckers PRS SE Custom 24-08 Ax8 Fessenden SD10 PSG Quilter TT15

Taka Perry View Member Profile	Nov 10 2013, 12:19 AM
Nov 10 2013, 12:19 AM	Learning Rock Star Posts: 642 Joined: 16-July 13 From: Australia	The concept is good, but the rhythm guitar at the start sounds a little muddy and lacks clarity for me. What amp sim or amp are you using? You are at GuitarMasterClass.net Don't miss today's free lick. Plus all our lessons are packed with free content! Don't miss today's free blues, jazz & country licks. Plus all our lessons are packed with free content! -------------------- Composer / Musician / Guitarist

Gabriel Leopardi View Member Profile	Nov 14 2013, 03:15 PM
Nov 14 2013, 03:15 PM	Instructor Posts: 36.043 Joined: 3-March 07 From: Argentina	As it usually happens with your compositions, the song is amazing! there are many different cool feelings and atmospheres there. But your timing is a problem in most of the song. I would like to ask two questions: 1. Are you sure that you are not having latency issues when you record? 2. Can you note that timing issues that we are talking about? Can't wait to hear a tight version of this nice tune! You are at GuitarMasterClass.net Don't miss today's free lick. Plus all our lessons are packed with free content! Don't miss today's free blues, jazz & country licks. Plus all our lessons are packed with free content! -------------------- My lessons Do you need a Guitar Plan? Join Gab's Army Check my band:Cirse Check my soundcloud:Soundcloud Please subscribe to my:Youtube Channel

Cosmin Lupu View Member Profile	Nov 15 2013, 09:15 AM
Nov 15 2013, 09:15 AM	Instructor Posts: 22.808 Joined: 14-June 10 From: Bucharest	Very good questions here - never thought if the issue here is a technical one You are at GuitarMasterClass.net Don't miss today's free lick. Plus all our lessons are packed with free content! Don't miss today's free blues, jazz & country licks. Plus all our lessons are packed with free content! -------------------- My lessons We can work on YOUR GUITAR and MUSIC development TOGETHER. Write me a private message if you wish to! Please subscribe to my Youtube Channel Days Of Confusion Facebook Page Mozart Rocks My facebook page

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