Break The Cycle - Chris Kerswell, just a quickie |
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Sep 1 2009, 04:03 PM
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I just wrote and recorded this song... its done on acoustic guitar and has vocals but it is intended to be changed for a full band and have electric guitars and distortion for the chorus.
the vocals are kept quiet and breathy, but with the full band there will be added "grrrrrrr" as ive heard it been described... if you have listened to any of my other songs, youll know what i mean  Verse-1 Sometimes I can see, through empty words though hidden, can lead me astray from danger, through the darkness waiting for the next time we come Build Up closing in, its alright again, this time we can break the cycle we can stop it from starting again together, united we stand pushing harder, just understand Chorus Wait, for the first time it disapears they hide beyond the stars the way these words seem so severe just wait for another day, theres no more conversations no theres no more complications this day we shall break the cycle or walk away Verse-2 your eyes have changed, to match the soul screaming past, the crowded rooms so stop the tricks and slow the time what has gone cannot be mine the seeds of life, shall carry on breaking through the crack of dawn now i see through shades of grey know that we can stop them id love to hear your thoughts on the song and just so you know it isnt finished yet there is going to be an ending on it instead of the abrupt stop lolthe lyrics stand to change too, but you get the idea  
break_the_cycle.mp3 ( 3.79MB )
Number of downloads: 442-------------------- Guitars: Epiphone Les Paul Standard w/ Dual EMG 81 Pickups. Size 11 Strings. Ibanez GRG170DX w/ Scallopd frets 17-24 - w/ Dimebucker and APH-1. Tanglewood TW28 STR DLX CE INDIANA Acoustic Guitar NEW: Dean Deceiver w/ EMG 81/EMG 85 Pickups Effects: Pod XT Live AND Pod X3 Live Recording: Cubase SX3 My Bands Myspace Act Of Silence Songs: Fly From The Inside (Cover) So Far Away Down Break The Cycle Never Again (Cover) Crash Wake Me More Acoustic Songs: Chris Kerswell Soundclick Page Check out Munta's Step By Step Songwriting Lesson |
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Sep 1 2009, 04:07 PM
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Nice build up! Nice voice! Nice acoustic sound!
BUT.... sometimes the vocals aren't all tight, but hard to describe  Overall... Cool!! |
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Sep 1 2009, 06:57 PM
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And try to get some more attention with your song
two replies in the last few hours, for such a nice piece of music, is way to little!
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Sep 1 2009, 09:22 PM
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QUOTE (kaznie_NL @ Sep 1 2009, 06:57 PM)  And try to get some more attention with your song two replies in the last few hours, for such a nice piece of music, is way to little!haha thanks for tryin dude, doesnt look like many ppl have to say much tho i appreciate the comments guys
-------------------- Guitars: Epiphone Les Paul Standard w/ Dual EMG 81 Pickups. Size 11 Strings. Ibanez GRG170DX w/ Scallopd frets 17-24 - w/ Dimebucker and APH-1. Tanglewood TW28 STR DLX CE INDIANA Acoustic Guitar NEW: Dean Deceiver w/ EMG 81/EMG 85 Pickups Effects: Pod XT Live AND Pod X3 Live Recording: Cubase SX3 My Bands Myspace Act Of Silence Songs: Fly From The Inside (Cover) So Far Away Down Break The Cycle Never Again (Cover) Crash Wake Me More Acoustic Songs: Chris Kerswell Soundclick Page Check out Munta's Step By Step Songwriting Lesson |
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Sep 1 2009, 09:56 PM
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Sounds GREAT man!
Good acoustic sound and as always you're singing is great! Thanks for sharing!
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Sep 1 2009, 10:10 PM
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Your voice sort of reminds me that dude from R.E.M.
 Hope, that doesnt offend you, since I like his voice much:)I liked the recording and sound as well - I would just maybe tone the presence up for the guitar. But thats just cosmetic and also depends on listener Very good job as always
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Sep 2 2009, 09:53 AM
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Sounds great I like the grungy vibe on this one. Very cool
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