Kristofer Dahl - A Loner, My new tune! |
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Kristofer Dahl - A Loner, My new tune! |
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Apr 19 2009, 09:39 AM |
Here is a tune I have been working on recently - where I have experimented with a new, lower voice. As usual suggestions are very welcome as I am trying to learn how to make my mixes (etc) as good as possible. Thanks for listening!
A Loner (now at iTunes) Do you know who I am? - I have planted a seed in your brain That makes the pain stay the same Unleash the beast! At least I have come to join the feast What a surprise... A loner - never meant to be your fall A loner - never meant to see you crawl A loner - descendant of your act You don't seem to get it - I am coming, no in fact, I am running I will haunt you in your sleep, no relief Bring back the beast Don't settle for the least Open your eyes... A loner - wasn't meant to be your fall A loner - never meant to see you crawl A loner - descendant of your act SOLO A loner - wasn't meant to be your fall A loner - never meant to see you crawl A loner - descendant of your act |
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Apr 19 2009, 10:14 AM |
Awwww cool! A candidate for the Judas Priest Painkiller album
You're really a Dr Jekyll and Mr Hyde, and I'm glad you letting your Mr Hyde only show in your music -------------------- My bands homepage
All time favourites: B. Streisand - Woman in Love, M. Hopkin - Those were the days, L. Richie - Hello |
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Apr 19 2009, 10:32 AM |
Great, love the chorus, its so catchy. The song sounds a little bit like System of a down to mee, especially the chorus.
I like it. |
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Apr 19 2009, 10:50 AM
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Awesome song! Kris, couldnt you make a lesson of this song?
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Apr 19 2009, 10:58 AM |
Each Your song is so different, but what they have in common is that they all sound great:)
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Apr 19 2009, 12:12 PM |
I loved the solo!
Really tasty. |
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Apr 19 2009, 01:46 PM |
Great tune Kris!!
All I can think of now is maybe more low end in riff guitars, rest of it was ok imo. -------------------- Youtube
MySpace Website Album "Let It Out" on iTunes and CD Baby Check out my video lessons and instructor board! The Pianist tune is progress,check it out! "ok.. it is great.. :P have you myspace? Can i to personalize this for you guy?" |
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Apr 19 2009, 01:50 PM |
Really good song again, Kris! I like your creativity! Respect!
I especially like the solo here. |
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Apr 19 2009, 02:39 PM |
Sounds awesome, very good style. For me ti falls somewhere between Metallica's "Loverman" song and S.O.A.D songs, but in a very positive way.
I really like the mix, it has a good dimension to it, perhaps trying to master the the overall mix a bit. It sounds a bit "edgy" to my taste, but it is not bad, just something that I would try experimenting with. cheers Kris, you rock -------------------- - Ivan's Video Chat Lesson Notes HERE
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Apr 19 2009, 02:53 PM |
Awesome to get your comment Muris - you're right I will probably experiment with a bassier sound next time. I have a constant fear of getting a too bassy guitar sound, which usually ruins everything since there are so many dubs. Indeed, working with low frequencies can be really tricky, most of the time either our ear cannot hear what's happening down there or speakers can't produce the subs! The way some producers are dealing with this issue is to cut trebs the on same guitar channel to compensate lows without pushing them at all, it's like weighting. -------------------- Youtube
MySpace Website Album "Let It Out" on iTunes and CD Baby Check out my video lessons and instructor board! The Pianist tune is progress,check it out! "ok.. it is great.. :P have you myspace? Can i to personalize this for you guy?" |
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Apr 19 2009, 02:59 PM |
Ah interesting - so do you mean that by removing trebs you get more bass this way? (if so that could explain where the bass went in this mix - there's loads of treble) Just like that, removing and not adding. Edit, you'll probably have to boost channel's level afterwards, less trebs or whatever always results in less volume as well. This post has been edited by Muris Varajic: Apr 19 2009, 03:01 PM -------------------- Youtube
MySpace Website Album "Let It Out" on iTunes and CD Baby Check out my video lessons and instructor board! The Pianist tune is progress,check it out! "ok.. it is great.. :P have you myspace? Can i to personalize this for you guy?" |
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