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Spiderusalem View Member Profile	Oct 13 2007, 03:03 AM
Oct 13 2007, 03:03 AM	GMC:er Posts: 569 Joined: 15-August 07 From: San Francisco, California	This forum might end up being incredibly short, seeing that this is a site mainly for guitarists. I'm gonna go out on a limb here and assume that some of you have tried to write lyrics in the past. so lets see it! I'll go first. Like most "first" lyrical attempts, this one I had is about a girl I know. And it may sound a little cheesy and pop-ish (and it is) but when I tried to get my thoughts and feelings down on paper this is what came out. Revolutionary Girl ©- Written by Thomas P (thats my real name) -Intro/Chorus- Revolutionary Girl Revolutionary Girl you change the face of my whole world Revolutionary Girl I feel your meaning when you speak you got that smile that makes me weak You might just save the world one day But you're completing mines today. Oh--------Oh!---------- -Chorus- You're the gift of inspiration girls like you happen once a generation the resolution in your eyes Now I wanna be a revolutionary guy Oh--------Oh!---------- -Chorus- -Solo Break! (which I'm finally learning how to do thanks to GMC!) - So go ahead and wave that sign While I figure out how to make you mine The Revolution that I must start Begins and ends from your heart to mine Oh--------Oh!---------- Revolutionary Girl Revolutionary Girl you change the face of my whole world Revolutionary Girl you change the face of my whole world Revolutionary Girl Revolutionary Girl -Fade Out- You are at GuitarMasterClass.net Don't miss today's free lick. Plus all our lessons are packed with free content! Don't miss today's free blues, jazz & country licks. Plus all our lessons are packed with free content! This post has been edited by Spiderusalem: Oct 23 2007, 06:08 AM -------------------- Equipment: Classical/Jazz hybrid guitar. blunt/black humor. Success is the best revenge.

AudunESP View Member Profile	Oct 13 2007, 03:10 AM
Oct 13 2007, 03:10 AM	GMC:er Posts: 153 Joined: 13-June 07	hehe, pretty cool. Me and a friend of mine worked out these lyrics over some acoustic licks i made up. I remember plains, dressed with grass and sparks of life, in my cell so dark! In these dripping walls, with marks of blood and scratches of nails, Im INCAGED! (impisoned for life") I can't recall the taste of life outside these walls in this suffocating place, i feel like waste. God, what have i done? my life, a burning hell! can you ease the pain, thats ripping off my mind? chorus: I feel nothing at all, They pushed me to fall again, I cant reach my soul, guess you ripped it apart again. (interlude + possibly short solo not made) Verse 2: My sins to human minds, have cursed my life, sentenced to suffer ETERNALY! Im forced into a cage, for sins i dont recall, I dont know if i've done it AT ALL! (imprisonded for life) but what am i to do, wheres an opening so bright, what have i to do, untill the end of life In my darkest place, i saw an angel of light showing me the way, to feel the taste of life. chorus at the first look it may look like this IN ANY WAY cant fit together with just 3 riffs, Verse, chorus and instrumental interlude, but suprisingly it does pretty emo isn't it? You are at GuitarMasterClass.net Don't miss today's free lick. Plus all our lessons are packed with free content! Don't miss today's free blues, jazz & country licks. Plus all our lessons are packed with free content! This post has been edited by AudunESP: Oct 13 2007, 03:13 AM -------------------- Scales = some boring stuff thats totally unnescesary to create cool music, liek, if ur stupid.

DeepRoots View Member Profile	Oct 13 2007, 03:10 AM
Oct 13 2007, 03:10 AM	Get to da Chopper! Posts: 2.700 Joined: 18-March 07 From: South Wales, UK	Sweet! Nice lyrics Spiderusalem! Unfortunately i'm lyrically retarded- buy hopefully i'll contribute to this thread some time soon! You are at GuitarMasterClass.net Don't miss today's free lick. Plus all our lessons are packed with free content! Don't miss today's free blues, jazz & country licks. Plus all our lessons are packed with free content!

Spiderusalem View Member Profile	Oct 13 2007, 03:24 AM
Oct 13 2007, 03:24 AM	GMC:er Posts: 569 Joined: 15-August 07 From: San Francisco, California	QUOTE (AudunESP @ Oct 12 2007, 07:10 PM) Im forced into a cage, for sins i dont recall, I dont know if i've done it AT ALL! (imprisonded for life) My favorite line in your piece. Reminiscent of Venom. Kinda reminds me of "buried alive" You are at GuitarMasterClass.net Don't miss today's free lick. Plus all our lessons are packed with free content! Don't miss today's free blues, jazz & country licks. Plus all our lessons are packed with free content! This post has been edited by Spiderusalem: Oct 13 2007, 03:25 AM -------------------- Equipment: Classical/Jazz hybrid guitar. blunt/black humor. Success is the best revenge.

Owen View Member Profile	Oct 13 2007, 04:40 AM
Oct 13 2007, 04:40 AM	GMC:er Posts: 1.461 Joined: 16-June 07 From: Scotland	Decination =========== Tyranous gaze, from a throne of bayonets The self destructive antithesis of all that is legitimate Encompassing two worlds, set for collision No questions poised, No clever descisions Oceans of blue within a sea of red Differentiating the new from the old Glorified, the new age constantine Yet another duplicate to the fold Recruiting the masses on false promises Selling the world, for the price of a life Flying that flag for a broken democracy Baying the politicians, playing with knives Constructing a desert, Christened by the name of peace Callous disregard, as worlds collide The masses stare on in an awestruck disbelief Blind, the truth in your minds eye Deceived of all destructive obtrusions Stare into the careless void Behold, a murderous dream of sycophantic illusions The silenced lie shrouded underneath a hill of poppies Opiate seeping reality into their unliving - A still sea of lifeless bodies Set to endure the ever lasting contemplation Life everlasting only to their dying statement This is no jaded conflict, this is decination © Owen Waldron 2007 Still a work in progress You are at GuitarMasterClass.net Don't miss today's free lick. Plus all our lessons are packed with free content! Don't miss today's free blues, jazz & country licks. Plus all our lessons are packed with free content! This post has been edited by Owen: Oct 23 2007, 08:02 AM -------------------- Don't Panic.

Spiderusalem View Member Profile	Oct 13 2007, 04:56 AM
Oct 13 2007, 04:56 AM	GMC:er Posts: 569 Joined: 15-August 07 From: San Francisco, California	Nice. I can tell that you really like Slayer (not that your sig makes it obvious enough) You are at GuitarMasterClass.net Don't miss today's free lick. Plus all our lessons are packed with free content! Don't miss today's free blues, jazz & country licks. Plus all our lessons are packed with free content! -------------------- Equipment: Classical/Jazz hybrid guitar. blunt/black humor. Success is the best revenge.

Owen View Member Profile	Oct 13 2007, 05:29 AM
Oct 13 2007, 05:29 AM	GMC:er Posts: 1.461 Joined: 16-June 07 From: Scotland	I'm actually not a huge fan of Slayer, sure I like them, but I dont listen to them a lot. But I suppose I can see were your coming from I'm not into all that mock Satan worship that Slayer lyrics seem to endorse though, I think thats a bit naff I always see this one as more Slayer-y ; 3 Minute War =============== I could die 50 times or more People are just figures 3 minute war. A race of arms, or of arms to race Across the world We seed our own poison As both creators and destroyers Deaths all around Fill the skys with blood and gore Come meet the wretched 3 minute war. Forecasting worldwide chrenobyle We shall cultivate our own corpses Basking in the rotting meat Knee deep in the dead. We radiate hatred Yet we still crave more Come bury the cadavers 3 Minute War. © Owen Waldron 2007 I've got tonnes of lyrics and half finished songs in general >_< I could go on forever here You are at GuitarMasterClass.net Don't miss today's free lick. Plus all our lessons are packed with free content! Don't miss today's free blues, jazz & country licks. Plus all our lessons are packed with free content! This post has been edited by Owen: Oct 23 2007, 08:02 AM -------------------- Don't Panic.

Spiderusalem View Member Profile	Oct 13 2007, 06:01 AM
Oct 13 2007, 06:01 AM	GMC:er Posts: 569 Joined: 15-August 07 From: San Francisco, California	QUOTE (Owen @ Oct 12 2007, 09:29 PM) Knee deep in the dead. hehe like the difficulty level in the game "Doom" You are at GuitarMasterClass.net Don't miss today's free lick. Plus all our lessons are packed with free content! Don't miss today's free blues, jazz & country licks. Plus all our lessons are packed with free content! This post has been edited by Spiderusalem: Oct 13 2007, 06:01 AM -------------------- Equipment: Classical/Jazz hybrid guitar. blunt/black humor. Success is the best revenge.

The Uncreator View Member Profile	Oct 13 2007, 06:12 AM
Oct 13 2007, 06:12 AM	Fire Up The Blades, Moderator Posts: 8.933 Joined: 6-March 07 From: St. Petersburg, Florida	Man, we had to write a song in my English class recently, i only had an hour to throw it together, but i ended up liking it alot, i even got riffs and some solo's for it. Kinda violent i know, it all comes from Richard Matheson's "Witch War" its not really about it, just inspired about it. ---------------------- ---------------------- The Seven Witches© ---------------------- ---------------------- Seven little girls, Seven little witches from hell Seven ways, In which you could die Parnormal Indiscriminate Murderous Intention A randomized way, Of taking life No one knows, Of where they truly come But all know, Where in lies there soul Otherworldy, Phenomena Possessors of the darkest souls (You, Will, Die!) In one of seven ways (You, Will, Die!) And you will never see it coming (The, End, Comes!) The Seven Witches Hunt (The, End Comes!) The Seven Witches Kill From another world, she crawls up your back The witch of mental destruction, Rips at your mind The sudden heat, Comes like an attack The witch of fire, Burning through your eyes You see the walls, slowly distort The Third Witch, The witch of dementia A sudden wound, Comes across your chest The witch of blood, Has come to get ya! (You, Will, Die!) In one of seven ways (You, Will, Die!) And you will never see it coming (The, End, Comes!) The Seven Witches Hunt (The, End, Comes!) In seven different ways Now the last three witches Are so truly grim Now the last three witches Can do worse than death Now these last 3 witches Will shear you limb from limb Now these last 3 witches Have come for you after death (You, Will, Die!) In one of seven ways (You, Will, Die!) And you will never see it coming (The, End, Comes!) The seven witches kill (You, End, Die!) The Seven Witches from hell Seven little girls, Seven little witches from hell Seven ways, In which you could die Parnormal Indiscriminate Murderous Intention A randomized way, Of taking life The Seven Witches Kill --------------- --------------- As violent as it was, my teacher liked it You are at GuitarMasterClass.net Don't miss today's free lick. Plus all our lessons are packed with free content! Don't miss today's free blues, jazz & country licks. Plus all our lessons are packed with free content! This post has been edited by The Uncreator: Oct 23 2007, 05:01 AM

Robin View Member Profile	Oct 13 2007, 06:41 AM
Oct 13 2007, 06:41 AM	GMC:er Posts: 2.483 Joined: 9-January 07 From: Alta, Norway	Really nice work everyone. I could post one of my lyrics, but if I do, all the religious people on GMC is gonna start hating me You are at GuitarMasterClass.net Don't miss today's free lick. Plus all our lessons are packed with free content! Don't miss today's free blues, jazz & country licks. Plus all our lessons are packed with free content! -------------------- Robin Myspace - Creep Colony Myspace - Creep Colony - Paralyzed

Owen View Member Profile	Oct 13 2007, 07:06 AM
Oct 13 2007, 07:06 AM	GMC:er Posts: 1.461 Joined: 16-June 07 From: Scotland	QUOTE (Robin @ Oct 13 2007, 06:41 AM) Really nice work everyone. I could post one of my lyrics, but if I do, all the religious people on GMC is gonna start hating me Post Post Post! I've yet to get started writing my anti-religous song yet, everything I note always pales in comparison to the first line I drempt up a while back. But yeah, I think we should have a Songwriting/Vocal forum here at GMC! You are at GuitarMasterClass.net Don't miss today's free lick. Plus all our lessons are packed with free content! Don't miss today's free blues, jazz & country licks. Plus all our lessons are packed with free content! -------------------- Don't Panic.

Kevin98497 View Member Profile	Oct 20 2007, 06:49 AM
Oct 20 2007, 06:49 AM	GMC:er Posts: 670 Joined: 17-August 06 From: UK	I remember the days when the silly guys tried to steal my lyrics then i slaped this devil hard made sure he went afar and never return ever but i see plenty of fools have already been fooled and i feel sorry for those tools lol no offence to nobody!! i lvoe gmc, eveyone is so nice You are at GuitarMasterClass.net Don't miss today's free lick. Plus all our lessons are packed with free content! Don't miss today's free blues, jazz & country licks. Plus all our lessons are packed with free content!

muntahunta View Member Profile	Oct 23 2007, 04:13 AM
Oct 23 2007, 04:13 AM	Learning Roadie Posts: 783 Joined: 6-September 07 From: Newcastle	QUOTE I remember the days when the silly guys tried to steal my lyrics then i slaped this devil hard made sure he went afar and never return ever but i see plenty of fools have already been fooled and i feel sorry for those tools ooooooook lol ill give this a go... heres some lyrics i wrote a few months back, its about a really rough time i went through about 5 years ago when someone very close to me died. the song basically says that you should never give up and live life to the fullest when you can because you never know when its gonna end. Rising Sun - Chris Kerswell Looking out through misty waters There they stand in the night I didnt think it could be over But dont give up without a fight [CHORUS] I can see a rising sun (I can see a rising sun) I can see a rising sun (I can see a rising sun) It sets for you Though the shadows are broken The figures standing are no more The little hope that you have stood for There they lay accross the floor [CHORUS] solo [CHORUS] copyright © 2007 Chris Kerswell You are at GuitarMasterClass.net Don't miss today's free lick. Plus all our lessons are packed with free content! Don't miss today's free blues, jazz & country licks. Plus all our lessons are packed with free content! This post has been edited by muntahunta: Oct 23 2007, 04:46 AM -------------------- Guitars: Epiphone Les Paul Standard w/ Dual EMG 81 Pickups. Size 11 Strings. Ibanez GRG170DX w/ Scallopd frets 17-24 - w/ Dimebucker and APH-1. Tanglewood TW28 STR DLX CE INDIANA Acoustic Guitar NEW: Dean Deceiver w/ EMG 81/EMG 85 Pickups Effects: Pod XT Live AND Pod X3 Live Recording: Cubase SX3 My Bands Myspace Act Of Silence Songs: Fly From The Inside (Cover) So Far Away Down Break The Cycle Never Again (Cover) Crash Wake Me More Acoustic Songs: Chris Kerswell Soundclick Page Check out Munta's Step By Step Songwriting Lesson

Jeff View Member Profile	Oct 23 2007, 04:29 AM
Oct 23 2007, 04:29 AM	GMC:er Posts: 877 Joined: 25-April 06 From: Virginia, US	I'm no copyright lawyer by any stretch of the imagination, but you guys might want to consider putting some text somewhere in your post that your lyrics/material has copyright or is protected. If you care - you never know. Perhaps Andrew can shed some light on this subject though? Otherwise I think this is a cool idea. Actually this brings up another question: if you post something like this on GMC, have you given up rights to your material? You are at GuitarMasterClass.net Don't miss today's free lick. Plus all our lessons are packed with free content! Don't miss today's free blues, jazz & country licks. Plus all our lessons are packed with free content!

Andrew Cockburn View Member Profile	Oct 23 2007, 04:42 AM
Oct 23 2007, 04:42 AM	Moderation Policy Director Posts: 10.459 Joined: 6-February 07 From: CT, USA	QUOTE (jeff @ Oct 22 2007, 11:29 PM) I'm no copyright lawyer by any stretch of the imagination, but you guys might want to consider putting some text somewhere in your post that your lyrics/material has copyright or is protected. If you care - you never know. Perhaps Andrew can shed some light on this subject though? Otherwise I think this is a cool idea. Actually this brings up another question: if you post something like this on GMC, have you given up rights to your material? I am ignorant in this area - I would suspect that at minimum you would need to include a copyright symbol and the year to claim it is copyrighted though. You are at GuitarMasterClass.net Don't miss today's free lick. Plus all our lessons are packed with free content! Don't miss today's free blues, jazz & country licks. Plus all our lessons are packed with free content! -------------------- Check out my Instructor profile Live long and prosper ... My Stuff: Electric Guitars : Ibanez Jem7v, Line6 Variax 700, Fender Plus Strat with 57/62 Pickups, Line6 Variax 705 Bass Acoustic Guitars : Taylor 816ce, Martin D-15, Line6 Variax Acoustic 300 Nylon Effects : Line6 Helix, Keeley Modded Boss DS1, Keeley Modded Boss BD2, Keeley 4 knob compressor, Keeley OxBlood Amps : Epiphone Valve Jnr & Head, Cockburn A.C.1, Cockburn A.C.2, Blackstar Club 50 Head & 4x12 Cab

muntahunta View Member Profile	Oct 23 2007, 04:44 AM
Oct 23 2007, 04:44 AM	Learning Roadie Posts: 783 Joined: 6-September 07 From: Newcastle	QUOTE I would suspect that at minimum you would need to include a copyright symbol and the year to claim it is copyrighted though. done.... kinda You are at GuitarMasterClass.net Don't miss today's free lick. Plus all our lessons are packed with free content! Don't miss today's free blues, jazz & country licks. Plus all our lessons are packed with free content! -------------------- Guitars: Epiphone Les Paul Standard w/ Dual EMG 81 Pickups. Size 11 Strings. Ibanez GRG170DX w/ Scallopd frets 17-24 - w/ Dimebucker and APH-1. Tanglewood TW28 STR DLX CE INDIANA Acoustic Guitar NEW: Dean Deceiver w/ EMG 81/EMG 85 Pickups Effects: Pod XT Live AND Pod X3 Live Recording: Cubase SX3 My Bands Myspace Act Of Silence Songs: Fly From The Inside (Cover) So Far Away Down Break The Cycle Never Again (Cover) Crash Wake Me More Acoustic Songs: Chris Kerswell Soundclick Page Check out Munta's Step By Step Songwriting Lesson

Andrew Cockburn View Member Profile	Oct 23 2007, 04:45 AM
Oct 23 2007, 04:45 AM	Moderation Policy Director Posts: 10.459 Joined: 6-February 07 From: CT, USA	QUOTE (muntahunta @ Oct 22 2007, 11:44 PM) done.... kinda Use ( c ) instead ... Col, just noticed that if you take the spaces out it gets automatically made into a copyright symbol!! ©©© see? You are at GuitarMasterClass.net Don't miss today's free lick. Plus all our lessons are packed with free content! Don't miss today's free blues, jazz & country licks. Plus all our lessons are packed with free content! This post has been edited by Andrew Cockburn: Oct 23 2007, 04:46 AM -------------------- Check out my Instructor profile Live long and prosper ... My Stuff: Electric Guitars : Ibanez Jem7v, Line6 Variax 700, Fender Plus Strat with 57/62 Pickups, Line6 Variax 705 Bass Acoustic Guitars : Taylor 816ce, Martin D-15, Line6 Variax Acoustic 300 Nylon Effects : Line6 Helix, Keeley Modded Boss DS1, Keeley Modded Boss BD2, Keeley 4 knob compressor, Keeley OxBlood Amps : Epiphone Valve Jnr & Head, Cockburn A.C.1, Cockburn A.C.2, Blackstar Club 50 Head & 4x12 Cab

muntahunta View Member Profile	Oct 23 2007, 04:46 AM
Oct 23 2007, 04:46 AM	Learning Roadie Posts: 783 Joined: 6-September 07 From: Newcastle	thanks, didnt know what the keyboard shortcut for that was You are at GuitarMasterClass.net Don't miss today's free lick. Plus all our lessons are packed with free content! Don't miss today's free blues, jazz & country licks. Plus all our lessons are packed with free content! -------------------- Guitars: Epiphone Les Paul Standard w/ Dual EMG 81 Pickups. Size 11 Strings. Ibanez GRG170DX w/ Scallopd frets 17-24 - w/ Dimebucker and APH-1. Tanglewood TW28 STR DLX CE INDIANA Acoustic Guitar NEW: Dean Deceiver w/ EMG 81/EMG 85 Pickups Effects: Pod XT Live AND Pod X3 Live Recording: Cubase SX3 My Bands Myspace Act Of Silence Songs: Fly From The Inside (Cover) So Far Away Down Break The Cycle Never Again (Cover) Crash Wake Me More Acoustic Songs: Chris Kerswell Soundclick Page Check out Munta's Step By Step Songwriting Lesson

Jeff View Member Profile	Oct 23 2007, 04:48 AM
Oct 23 2007, 04:48 AM	GMC:er Posts: 877 Joined: 25-April 06 From: Virginia, US	QUOTE (Andrew Cockburn @ Oct 22 2007, 10:45 PM) Use ( c ) instead ... Col, just noticed that if you take the spaces out it gets automatically made into a copyright symbol!! ©©© see? ©ool! You are at GuitarMasterClass.net Don't miss today's free lick. Plus all our lessons are packed with free content! Don't miss today's free blues, jazz & country licks. Plus all our lessons are packed with free content!

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