Original 8 String Death Metal Track |
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Original 8 String Death Metal Track |
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Feb 16 2015, 10:51 AM
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Feb 16 2015, 08:33 PM |
Hi Kaaba, great to hear you are composing originals!
I like the precision of your playing and song sounds technical. Are you planning to get some vocals over it? Maybe sing them yourself? Have you tried vocal growling? Is this a complete song or you are planning to expand on it? It ends a bit abruptly, it might be interesting to incorporate a different "ending" section and maybe try to contrast a bit more sections in the song. For the video, I'd suggest maybe including you playing the bass as well. This will help you make the video more dynamic. -------------------- For GMC support please email support (at) guitarmasterclass.net
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Feb 22 2015, 04:41 PM |
Hi Kaaba, great stuff!!
Your riffing is killer on this video, I'm impressed of the precision of your riffing. The whole tune sounds totally tight and interesting. I don't note weak parts or sections that doesn't sound great so I don't think that there is something to improve here. Adding bass and maybe some synth or other instruments could make it sound even cooler. The lack of melody or vocals is not a problem on this one because it's a short tune but if this would be longer, I would like to hear it with vocals or some synths that create different atmospheres. This tune is very promising, keep going! -------------------- My lessons
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