Canon Rock (again), my 2nd take |
|
|
|
|
Mar 21 2008, 07:55 AM
|
|
canon_rock_original.mp3 ( 5.06MB )
Number of downloads: 366ok i got a few comments on my first take about the phaser effect and that it felt rushed and that it was missing pieces so i went ahead and did another take but this time at original temp and the orignal backing with no parts cut out. hopefully you can hear me a bit better so fell free to give me some more feedback. cheers 
|
 |
 
|
|
|
|
|
|
Mar 21 2008, 11:35 AM
|
|
somecrazyguy.. that's somecrazysh**
Really great job man! really enjoyd the improvised bits, and you just nailed it! |
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
Mar 21 2008, 11:43 AM
|
|
i like it, how long did it take to learn this song ?
-------------------- i go where the guitar takes me
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
Mar 21 2008, 11:50 AM
|
|
Your playing and improv are good, but the quality of the recording is terrible....
-------------------- I got a completely new $600 bass for $300. What a deal!
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
Mar 21 2008, 12:26 PM
|
|
It is nice, but I can hear the buzzing noise from the guitar, that should really not be heard. Try to put some gate or roll off the volume when you are not playing.
-------------------- - Ivan's Video Chat Lesson Notes HERE
- Check out my GMC Profile and Lessons - (Please subscribe to my) YouTube Official Channel - Let's be connected through ! Facebook! :) |
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
Mar 21 2008, 03:19 PM
|
|
This is a definitly better version
 You playing it very good! Much better without a phaser!
-------------------- For GMC support please email support (at) guitarmasterclass.net
Check out my lessons and my instructor board. Check out my beginner guitar lessons course! ; Take a bass course now! |
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
Mar 21 2008, 06:43 PM
|
|
I like this one alot better. Still some minor flaws and bum notes here and there.. but it's not the easiest song to play either
All in all, good stuff. This post has been edited by Trond Vold: Mar 21 2008, 06:43 PM -------------------- Guitars: Schecter Stiletto Classic, Jackson SLSMG, Ibanez RG-380 Japan, Gibson Les Paul Studio
Amp: Marshall JMP-1 -> Rocktron Velocity 100 -> Marshall JCM-900 Lead 4x12 FX and stomps: T.C Electronics G-Sharp, Korg SDD-1200, Emma Transmorgrifier, BYOC Tribooster, GGG Green Ringer, Dinosaur Overdrive, Voodoo Lab SuperFuzz, Sovtek Bassballs, Line6 Tap Tremolo, EHX Screaming Bird. ___________________________________________________ My Lessons! My Instructor Board! My Myspace! |
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
Mar 21 2008, 11:26 PM
|
|
i listened twice. yes, better. it was nice. most would be impressed. especially with the backing track giving support. That is one busy backing track as we both know, some people on youtube would claim guys are not even playing, the backing track is so busy, it even has lead in it.
But I know this song in my sleep, I can hear you, some nice elements to your play. And if you keep at it, you will be a very good guitarist I am sure. Now the bad news. Same as last time. Weak on sweeps, and you skipped all the 16th note runs, and 16th note 8-note sweep run. You really have to do more with your sweep before the first "wedding part". You need to put a full 5 string sweep in there. I don't do that exactly like JerryC, what he does is ridiculous, I don't think it is humanly possible to play that as he tabbed it, and play it clean. He certainly did not. And Funtwo came up with his own. But you really can't get by with a thin 3 string sweep there. Oh, good to hear some harmonics. I would put more of them in, and work on making them stand out. Making them squeal more. Biggest thing was bypassing all the 16th note parts, the hard parts. And the hard tapping part from the 1st to 5th string. That is not really all that hard, once you get a handle on the rhythm. Toughest parts are the 8-note 16th note sweep run, and the AP preceding it. Even though that AP run is 8th note triplets, I consider it harder than the final 16th note AP run. Bottom line, it was nice for your general public, but we are not that here. I think people should be very critical here. Oh, if someone is really thin skinned, I would not even bother with them. But based on your comeback, I am sure you have intestinal fortitude. edit: oh, make your harmonics stronger. listen to this guy, great harmonics. I play this pretty well I think, it is not as hard as Canon Rock. Nobody but the cats and dog hear my Canon Rock, and I have been working on it for a year. You just cannot play that song as tabbed well until your level is pretty high, I am not there yet. http://youtube.com/watch?v=N7ICC2D_8K8 This post has been edited by fkalich: Mar 21 2008, 11:30 PM |
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
Mar 26 2008, 09:33 AM
|
|
thats crazy loved it
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
Apr 20 2008, 07:04 PM
|
|
I'm trying it now, but it's realy the riffs are prety hard to get. You did those riffs very very nice!
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
Apr 20 2008, 09:25 PM
|
|
Nicely done
-------------------- My Gear
Ibanez RG Jackson js30 warrior jackson rr24 Line 6 Spider III amp Line 6 pod xt live Washburn acoustic Youtube Account My bands Myspace  |
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
Apr 20 2008, 09:30 PM
|
|
nice track but be more carful to the timing in the start
nice what you did |
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
Apr 20 2008, 11:18 PM
|
|
nice job
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
Apr 23 2008, 05:02 PM
|
|
cool
-------------------- |
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
Apr 23 2008, 05:11 PM
|
|
Nice!
I haven't practiced Canon Rock for like half a year, gona check it out again (hopefully I can play it better now  )
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
Apr 23 2008, 05:53 PM
|
|
sounds awesome!
-------------------- “You have to go on and be crazy. Craziness is like heaven.” |
|
|
|
|
 
|
1 User(s) are reading this topic (1 Guests and 0 Anonymous Users)
0 Members:
