Take 2: Five Finger Death Punch, Lesson By Gabriel Leopardi |
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Apr 27 2018, 07:42 PM
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Original lesson: Five Finger Death Punch by Gabriel Leopardi
My 2nd take! I paid more attention to the lead part this time! Links to previous attempts at this lesson: https://www.guitarmasterclass.net/guitar_forum/index.php?showtopic=59105 |
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Apr 30 2018, 04:37 PM
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Nice George!! This is getting better!
 I can notice improvements along the whole take regarding the different elements that we've commented in your previous take. Here I'll sumarize the things that still need more work in order to polish the lesson. - Timing: You tend to go before the beat in most of the parts. This happens with rhythm sections but also in the solo part. Try to avoid rushing the tempo when playing. Put your attention on this and everything will sound tighter. - The part at 00:44 is the one that needs more work from the rhythm section. Isolate it and try to get more comfortable with rhythm. - Vibrato: Work on this technique. Sometimes it sounds a bit weak, but the main issue is that it starts too quiclkly and makes your lead sound like "nervous". - Bending: Your bends are not bad, but there is still room to polish pitch. Ok mate, I would continue playing this one so your metal playing keeps evolving. Cheers! -------------------- My lessons
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May 4 2018, 08:24 AM
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Pass: 7
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