Muris Free Collab No 1!, Final Mix and Comments |
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Feb 20 2009, 05:39 PM
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And here it is!!
Coffeeman, I'm really sorry for not waiting for you any longer but we already missed the deadline almost for a week, there'll be more collab tho so don't worry. Each take was very individual and I enjoyed going through all this, maybe few comments might be too hard but it's all in best interest for you guys, I hope you won't be mad at me after all.  
Muris_Free_Colab_1____Final_Mix.mp3 ( 11.09MB )
Number of downloads: 506ErikEklund That is was just great, I have not much to add knowing that you're still pretty young! Very mature thinking and playing, smooth phrasing, smart use of stacatto notes, clean technique, creamy tone, bravo Erik!! fatb0t First 4 bars of your take were something coolest I've heard in a while, so relaxed and chill and just slightly "of beat" right as it should!! To be honest, I was expecting you to keep going in similar direction but you have chosen the path of rock shred.  Anyhow, there were many nice ideas but small problem with rest of the take is timing, it's not as much tight as it should be, specially if you play faster shreddy chops. Pay more attention to that in the future, good effort and thanks for participating! Tolek Ok, first of all I must say few things about your tone, it was waaay too much in midds and treble so I had to do some cuts, please think of that next time when you record something, listen it along with backing and hear if it jumps too much out of the picture. Now about playing, I can tell that you had many things to show but you under pressure of technique, your chops were all around but nothing to catch on imo and mostly cause of timing you were struggling with. Listen to your take after you record it, does it flow, does it have constant move, can someone remember a piece of it after one listen etc? Those are some of the question you can ask yourself always and questions you'll come up with will help you A LOT! Thanks fro effort tho, keep it up. KaznieNL Very rocky playing with few nicely placed pinch harmonics which a liked a lot. Your timing was also well guided with 16th notes as top speed which was more then enough. But there was a problem in last couple of bars, it modulates into Cm key but somehow you stayed with Bm pentatonic, what happened? Ajmurrel I guess this take was recorded in London but you never know with Adam, he's a travel agent so it might have been recorded on top of the Great Wall as well!!! So, tons of Gilmourish licks here which made my day, I specially liked way the you ended most of them with those "lost" bends at the end of licks, very cool! Cm part was a bit over pushed, like a tapping assault!! But you broke a recorded when you recorded this take in like 2 mins so you're excused this time. Crazyfret You stayed low and away from exibitions all the time which was VERY appreciated, pretty different from the rest of the takes, cudos!! Now, intonation was a bit too sharp, maybe you were fretting too hard or it was just tuned slightly up, not sure. All in all it was very descent playing without pushing yourself over the limits with no reason, I was only missing more vibrato here, that would be real score, good work! Berko I can tell that you played with lot of confidence! I specially liked part over E chord with those repetitive rhythmic sequences, well placed. But something weird happened over G7 chord, I would really have to listen very closely to figure out theoretical side of those licks since you were "out" pretty much, and same happened at the end of section over Cm. Still, it was too "out" but only in my opinion, it's easy to hear that you play each note with courage and attitude which is good, a bit more work on theory and you'll be there, god job Berko! Iluha Too much reverb, dial it down next time, there is really no need for this much of reverb. Playing was nice tho, timing pretty steady which is very important when you play over shuffle feel backing. Considering your technical level I guess you could have done more work on constructing whole solo, make more sense out if it, put a road map for it. This was not bad at all but I'm sure that you can give more "music" into your playing, keep it up, it's going great! Velvet Roger This was very relaxed take with some cool licks including repetition in different octaves trick which gave more color to whole take. Last few bars with tapping were also nicely played and you ended right on time. There are some problems regarding bends and timing on 3nps patterns but it's not impossible to fix tho! Thanks for your effort Roger, well done. Peixe Another creamy tone and nice phrasing! Everything was just up to my taste except of couple of licks. You are at descent technical level with lot of sense for music, just pay more attention on how you end each "sentence" or line that you play. It would be shame to start with something like "darling, you mean everything in the world to..." and end with " who's for soda?", I'm sure you know what I mean, good work tho!
Muris_Free_Colab_1____Final_Mix.mp3 ( 11.09MB )
Number of downloads: 506Thank you all once more for taking a place in this collab and see you in next one, nice work everyone!  -------------------- Youtube
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Feb 20 2009, 05:59 PM
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QUOTE (Crazyfret @ Feb 20 2009, 05:55 PM)  I'm glad you noticed the intonation is out I thought it was me a first. I did check before recording the tuning, (I assume it was standard), but I have notice it on my lick building collab with David. I might be wrong but was wondering if the action is prob a little too low and the sting is catching a fret and creating a harmonic? I seems to be the top 3 strings I'm having problems with. I heard no harmonics, only notes too high/sharp.
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Feb 20 2009, 06:03 PM
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QUOTE (Ajmurrell @ Feb 20 2009, 06:01 PM) Haha, I've update my signature jsut for your amusement  Great stuff, thanks!  Oh yeah, I noticed time gaps in your playing but somehow forgot to mention that, taking a breath between licks is good thing most of the time.
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Feb 20 2009, 07:02 PM
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QUOTE (Iluha @ Feb 20 2009, 06:54 PM) I'm confused.. I agree that I put too much reverb, but I think that if my solo has a high point is it's structure, it was preety much planned out, so I don't understand what do you mean I could put more "music" in it? More melodic approach is what I actually meant. QUOTE (fatb0t @ Feb 20 2009, 06:27 PM) I think it's a matter of trying to play something that I haven't fully mastered yet perhaps... I need to just stop trying to go fast perhaps and just throw in an occasional shred line here or there... I believe that's the thing. Try to memorize some licks and patterns and then apply them to your playing. It's not just notes and fingering but timing of each lick as well. Think of 8ths , triplets etc while practicing and playing, listen to the groove and beat, it'll come to you with time.
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Feb 20 2009, 07:08 PM
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QUOTE (Iluha @ Feb 20 2009, 07:04 PM) What? my take was very rythm based, and the timing was preety much spot on except for some sloppy parts... i ruled out some 8th,triplets, quadrets, and other type licks because they just didn't sound right to me, what I used in my take is what I felt was most fitting..That was not directed to you but to fatb0t, read closely.
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Feb 20 2009, 07:11 PM
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QUOTE (Iluha @ Feb 20 2009, 07:10 PM) Ow oops lol, I was reading your comment while posting and it didn't show you quoting fatb0t, sorry.. Cheers
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Feb 20 2009, 08:04 PM
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Thanks a lot Muris for the comments, which were spot-on (working on it to fix those
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Feb 20 2009, 10:04 PM
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All cool, no need to be sorry.
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Feb 21 2009, 12:31 AM
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Thanks for the comments Muris, I really enjoyed this collab
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Feb 21 2009, 04:34 AM
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Some cool takes here
I enjoyed listening this one. Well done everybody
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