Ok, I really like the "other info" with a kind of little interview answer from Muris, liked that a lot.
This article started as a 3 I`m going to give you an extra point turning it into a 4.
I still think theres points that you`ve kept to a bare minimum, for example, Endorsement section, I`ve heard of his endorsee`s but look at it from the view point of someone reading it that hasnt, just a couple of lines to say that Stan Hinesly endorses Muris, he designs custom pickups which he tailored for Muris`s own personal sound, a link to the website, and do something like that for each one, shredneck etc, tell us very quickly what it is, thats the difference from a bare bones article and a fact filled informative article.
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