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GMC Forum _ Wiki Writers _ Wikiwriters Resubmission-gus G

Posted by: Smikey2006 May 23 2008, 12:32 AM

well i took a second look at my Gus g article after Smells commented that it wasnt quite up to snuff so i added some content, added a couple of pictures, re wrote the biography and expanded upon some other areas.. Enjoy again.. any suggestions msg me! any improvements that can be made i wish to make
http://www.guitarmasterclass.net/wiki/index.php/Gus-G

Posted by: Hisham Al-Sanea May 23 2008, 09:47 AM

i saw the first Wiki about Kostas its better than before but i think more pictures if you can add would be much better
any way thanks for your work

Posted by: Smells May 23 2008, 11:22 PM

QUOTE (Smikey2006 @ May 23 2008, 12:32 AM)

well i took a second look at my Gus g article after Smells commented that it wasnt quite up to snuff

aww you knew what I meant though

Ok, much improved upon than before

theres probably more to add in there but I thought it was nice and informative, my only suggestion would maybe change the order around a little, but that possibly is my own personal preference, so his gear maybe comes a little later, and his influences are a little earlier to kinda tie in with his biography.

I`ll regrade as a 4 - giving you 2 extra points for this one