First Lyrics I've Ever Written Options

[TreyDeschamp]

So I wrote these lyrics in religion class after readung revelations or whatever the section is about the apocolypse. Me and my friend started a band and he told me to write some lyrics so I did. I need some posotive and negative critisim
so heres the song

The Second Beast

With horns like a dragons
come out of the ground
everyone screams in a little town
wide awake i sit at night
sitting in horrifyed fright

Chorus:

The Second Beast has risen and has come
we saw it rise from the grave but will gods hand save

The bodies are lying in the streets
we need this one who we hear can difeat
this beast that may be over there
his smell lingers in the air

Chorus:

The Second Beast has risen and has come
we saw it rise from the grave but will gods hand save
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