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Posted by: Eat-Sleep-andJam Aug 9 2008, 06:49 PM

Verse:

Theres a long road ahead of me.
My future is hidden in that foggy mist.
Still I ponder what Im going to be,
When I look failure in the eyes.
And I know that I may not succed.

All this optimism,
Is covered in a blanket of my fears.
With this Ill hide my self.
So noone will ever see me.

Chorus:
You wouldnt want to be me ?
You wouldnt want to see me,
Hidden,
In a blanket of my fears.


Verse 2:
You wouldnt want to know,
How much Ive been through.
Ive wasted so much time,
Venting my anger and writing about you.

Even when I look my self in the eyes,
I look away.
Turn back around,
And look another day.

I still remember the days when we used to play.
And that day when you moved,
You took my heart away.

Now Ive been here,
By myself playing all alone.



Chorus Revised :
You wouldnt want to be me ?
You wouldnt want to see me,
Hidden,
In a blanket of my fears.

Please lift the cover,
My long lost lover.

Please lift the cover,
My long lost lover.

Please lift the cover,
And kiss me like we did !


Guitar Solo !


Verse 3:

I remember that day when you moved away,
Packed up all my s***,
Threw it all away.
I wish you could see me now....

Now that we meet at last,
Seems like time stopped,
And waited.
For me to find you here.
Hidden.
In a blanket of my fear.

You hear my tear drops hit floor,
There is one,
But now theres many more.
On the floor.
You love me now,
And forever more.

I wrap that blanket around you,
Just to show,
We will make it through.
Just me and you.
As we stay Hidden.
From the truth.



------ © John Minoia 2008

Hi everyone


Another song. I think the visual is pretty clear if you follow along.

Boy Meets Girl, Both fall in love, Girl Moves, Boy Gets Upset, They met Again, He tells her about the fear of not having her.,
They fall in love again.

Edit for language - Smells

Posted by: Nemanja Filipovic Aug 10 2008, 10:59 AM

Ah,great story man,I really enjoy your stories,they are allways pretty direct even when the words are covered up with metaphors,great job.

Posted by: Eat-Sleep-andJam Aug 10 2008, 05:21 PM

Thanks alot man Glad you liked it ! If anyone didnt like any of it please let me know ! I like honest opinons:D

Posted by: Nemanja Filipovic Aug 10 2008, 05:34 PM

No prob,and this was honest opinion

Posted by: Eat-Sleep-andJam Aug 10 2008, 05:39 PM

No , I wasnt saying it wasnt I just wanted to make sure people arent just saying nice things to make me feel good thats all

And thanks again