Classic Ballad Soloing Collaboration, UPLOAD THREAD |
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Sep 13 2009, 10:45 PM
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As always thanks for the great & helpful feedback!
I know exactly what you mean - will try and improve! Cheers!! Berglmir |
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Sep 14 2009, 09:31 PM
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QUOTE (Staffy @ Sep 13 2009, 09:59 PM)  Thx for the very constructive criticism Ivan! Since I love playing to this kind of music, I will try to improve the second part. ( I actually had other ideas, but my lousy technique stopped me...) If its OK with You I will post an updated take in a couple of days.  //Staffay Of course my friend, another take would be great! Thanks QUOTE (Berglmir @ Sep 13 2009, 11:45 PM) As always thanks for the great & helpful feedback! I know exactly what you mean - will try and improve! Cheers!! Berglmir Thanks a lot man! QUOTE (kaznie_NL @ Sep 14 2009, 03:21 PM) Thanks  Me is prowd Practice shows progress! Well done
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Sep 17 2009, 04:01 AM
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As usual I am cutting short on time. Here is a third take since I said I would. I will post the NBT for the one you think I should use. thanks man
Classic_leedbreak_take3_BT.mp3 ( 877.04K )
Number of downloads: 156
Classic_leedbreak_take3_NBT.mp3 ( 877.04K )
Number of downloads: 109This post has been edited by leedbreak: Sep 21 2009, 05:29 AM -------------------- - leedbreak
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Sep 17 2009, 04:25 AM
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QUOTE (Hammerhead @ Sep 16 2009, 10:19 PM) Hey to all in the colab! This sounds great! Can I ask, I always seem to miss the start of the collaborations and would like to try some. How do I find them when they start, and is it too late to try to join this one? THanks  You can subscribe to the forum itself and receive email when new threads are started or you can try to keep up manually with the "View New Posts" link in the menu bar above. Here's a picture the forum subscription link, use it on the sub-forum that you want to be notified about (not just any old sub-forum):  -------------------- ::jafomatic
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Sep 18 2009, 08:38 AM
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leedbreak:
Rhythm: Starting great in the first part with a perfect timing. Every note is precisely in place, and the 16th notes in the end of the part 1 are now enriched nicely with some 8ths as well, which is very nice to hear. The second part is also very good, although there are some minor timing issues in the end. Phrasing: This part had very similar structure as the one before, and I believe the phrases were are blended together nicely. There are some inserted effects, like the slide in from bellow in the beginning of the part. All the notes came out clear as well. Second part is the only part that you played one note outside of scale towards the end (in that descending sequence), but besides that I think the take was perfect, and all the notes had their proper place, well done. Technique: The whole take was played very nicely. The problems that I saw were mostly around that big bend in the first part and legato triplets in the first part as well that were a bit slow. The triplet sequences in the second part also would use some tightening up. However these are small details, since all the notes came out very clear and with solid timing. Sound: Good tone, as said previously, well balanced, low buzz. Not that smooth, but goes along with the track nicely and cuts well through the mix. In general, I believe this take is a major improvement, because it is played very clean and precise. The only note that is outside of the key is the one towards the end, and I consider this the only mistake in the whole take. I can see that you tried very hard to do this solo, and this version is the best one, since you have that degree of comfort and security while playing this take. Well done. -------------------- - Ivan's Video Chat Lesson Notes HERE
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Sep 19 2009, 12:27 AM
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Ah great man, glad to hear that, and thanks a lot for participating in such a great way on this collab. Well done with the composition and playing as well!
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Sep 19 2009, 12:32 AM
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Aloha,
Rock_Ballad_consolidated_consolidated_consolidated.mp3 ( 906.49K )
Number of downloads: 166with backing I think I read that we no longer need to upload 2 files is that true? Just 1 file with backing works?
02_Final_Lead_pan_Vai_consolidated_090918_1316.mp3 ( 906.49K )
Number of downloads: 136without backing any how here are both! All feedback is welcome, thanks for letting me jump in -------------------- When I look down at my hands... I see "FINGERS of DOOM"
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Sep 19 2009, 12:14 PM
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Sep 22 2009, 11:01 PM
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Hi Ivan.
I tried to fix up the things You were commenting, I dunno if I succeeded...  I changed part two, but the lasr note is not 100%..... Also I recorded with another guitar (Warmoth) as well as used one of Muris presets from GR3 with som modifications. //Staffay --------------------  Guitars: Ibanez AM-200, Ibanez GB-10, Fender Stratocaster Classic Player, Warmouth Custom Built, Suhr Classic Strat, Gibson Les Paul Standard 2003, Ibanez steel-string Amps: Fender Hot Rod Deluxe, Marshall JMP 2103, AER 60 Effects: BOSS DD-20, Danelectro Trans. Overdrive, TC-Electronics G-Major, Dunlop Wah-wah, Original SansAmp, BOSS DD-2 Music by Staffy can be found at: Staffay at MySpace |
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Sep 23 2009, 04:46 PM
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Aloha Ivan,
I've tried to address the tone and clean it up just a bit... so I did another take.
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Rock_Balladtake2wBT.mp3 ( 906.49K )
Number of downloads: 76
Rock_Baladtake2nBT.mp3 ( 906.49K )
Number of downloads: 57-------------------- When I look down at my hands... I see "FINGERS of DOOM"
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Sep 24 2009, 05:55 PM
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Hey Ivan, there goes my take... Its pretty much of an improvisation... It was fun! Hope you like it!
Can
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Enforcer_Ivan_Classic_Ballad_Full.mp3 ( 1.07MB )
Number of downloads: 119
Enforcer_Ivan_Classic_Ballad_NoBt.mp3 ( 1.07MB )
Number of downloads: 96--------------------  incoming spoiler read it at your own risk! Spoiler: it, surely, spoiled me!!! and may the force be with you :) |
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Sep 24 2009, 10:12 PM
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Im Late?
 Heres mine! 
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Sep 25 2009, 03:56 PM
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Here's my take Ivan
Mostly improvised
This post has been edited by Dexxter: Sep 25 2009, 03:56 PM |
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