New Song, New Approach |
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New Song, New Approach |
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Apr 14 2009, 01:37 PM |
First I gotta tell you that the lyrics are really awesome. They do require some work on them to be perfect tho, for example I didn't liked to use of a word "vacuum". But other than that there are some great rhymes, and stylistic figures. Excellent!
Second, about the song: I cannot comment it that much cause I'm at laptop atm, but judging from what I hear, the vocals could be more defined in sound. It's OK to scream/growl if this is what you want, I just had a feeling as a listener that the sound of them was a bit muddy in relation to the music. I like the intro as well. cheers mate, really nice work. -------------------- - Ivan's Video Chat Lesson Notes HERE
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